20-02-2009, 10:58 PM
Next...me
Ok am sa incep cu criticile:
1.Ai capitolele fffoarte scurte
2.Descrierea..... in unele locuri ai in altele nu
3.Cateva greseli de tastare
4.Am mai intalnit ideea cu "...toate fetele din liceu au trecut pe la el prin pat..."
Concluzie:
Daca ia asculta de sfaturi ficul tau ar fi unul destul de frumos.
Bye-bye
Ok am sa incep cu criticile:
1.Ai capitolele fffoarte scurte
2.Descrierea..... in unele locuri ai in altele nu
3.Cateva greseli de tastare
4.Am mai intalnit ideea cu "...toate fetele din liceu au trecut pe la el prin pat..."
Concluzie:
Daca ia asculta de sfaturi ficul tau ar fi unul destul de frumos.
Bye-bye
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'Cause I luw my two susy ....:::SasuSaku:::...., and ^^"Bubbles"^^ And my family is too big^^ (only girlz) Sunt mandra rau mey voi, am o moomy cea mai tare.^^ Yes, you Mitzuke-chan
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[b]He is mine!*MINE*''Cuz I can't have Deidara (he's Akatsuna Lynn's) and I have Sasuke I decide to have and this anime hot boy^^
Ha, ha, hi, hi, ha, ha, ho!
Why I like Sasuke-kun?It's simple!He is so hot, the most beautiful, powerful, clever and again is the most beautiful^^He is mine and you can't do anything^^
I say again and the last time: Hitsugaya-kun si MINE!!! ONLY MINE!!! GET IT?