Ok, check this out. Am postat asta pe un alt joc, in engleza, si mi-e prea lene sa-l scriu si in romana. Sper ca n-am incalcat vreo regula postandu-l in English only, dar n-am vazut sa existe vreuna de genul asta. Trebuie sa mentionez ca aceasta poveste este spusa de doua personaje, 5 capitole unul, 5 capitole celalalt. Pentru a evita confuziile, capitopele lui Alice sunt marcate cu ♫, iar ale lui Josh cu â¤. Daca aveti intrebari in legatura cu ce inseamna un anumit cuvant sau commenturi, va rog postati-le si voi incerca sa raspund la toate. Ok, here I come:
[center]♫I.Far away from home[/center]
I could sense that something was wrong. It was summer holiday, but the feeling I had was not normal. It was...off. Instead of feeling free, I was feeling the opposite. I was feeling like somebody got control of something that should never be controlled. Something that should be free. Or maybe I was wrong. Maybe I shouldn't oppose it. Maybe it was fate that made it happen like that. Or maybe not. Could it be because I was in a place where I didn't want to be? I was in a new place, far away from home, where I didn't know anything or anybody. A dusty place, full of spider webs, where some unusual creatures live. A place with dilapidated, mildewy houses. A place where no 18 year old town girl should be.
In a village.
"You'll have fun, it's a very beautiful place there!"
That's what they said. Yeah, of course. It's a very boring place here.
"Alice! There you are! Why did you close yourself here? Go outside, it's a very beautiful weather." Ray said, entering in the warehouse.
"You know I don't wanna be here. I'm a town girl, this is not my place. My only home is in Liverpool, and you know that, uncle." I said.
Uncle Raymond was a tall, black haired man, wearing an overall and an worn-out T-shirt.
"Whatever. At least go and buy some sugar for Amy."
"Aunt Amanda is making a cake?"
"Yep. Now go."
"Right away! Her cakes are the best!" I said, exiting the warehouse.
Outside, there was a large courtyard, full of thousands kinds of different plants. There, next to the warehouse, was a big, old fashion house. The black metal fence was covered in climbing ivy.
I got out on the gate and I looked at the dusty road and the old shop across it. I went into the shop. Behind the counter was a short, bald old man with some round-framed glasses and a white moustache.
"Oh, you must be Alice, Ray's and Amy's niece!" the old man said. "My name is Sam, and I'm glad to meet you."
"Yeah...Nice to meet you too...Can you give me some sugar please?" I asked.
"Here you go. One pound, please."
I took the sugar and I gave him the money, then left.
"Oh, what do we have here?...A new girl in my village?" said a tall guy, probably of my age.
Unlike his friends - three guys wearing overalls - he was wearing blue-jeans and a gray T-shirt. I didn't like the way he said "my village".
"What's your name, kid?"
"That's not your business, you loser!" I replied.
"Oh, so the new girl is brave? My name is Joshua and I control everything here. So, I ask you one more time: what's your name?"
"And I tell you one more time that my name is not your business." I said again, entering the courtyard.
[center]♫I.Far away from home[/center]
I could sense that something was wrong. It was summer holiday, but the feeling I had was not normal. It was...off. Instead of feeling free, I was feeling the opposite. I was feeling like somebody got control of something that should never be controlled. Something that should be free. Or maybe I was wrong. Maybe I shouldn't oppose it. Maybe it was fate that made it happen like that. Or maybe not. Could it be because I was in a place where I didn't want to be? I was in a new place, far away from home, where I didn't know anything or anybody. A dusty place, full of spider webs, where some unusual creatures live. A place with dilapidated, mildewy houses. A place where no 18 year old town girl should be.
In a village.
"You'll have fun, it's a very beautiful place there!"
That's what they said. Yeah, of course. It's a very boring place here.
"Alice! There you are! Why did you close yourself here? Go outside, it's a very beautiful weather." Ray said, entering in the warehouse.
"You know I don't wanna be here. I'm a town girl, this is not my place. My only home is in Liverpool, and you know that, uncle." I said.
Uncle Raymond was a tall, black haired man, wearing an overall and an worn-out T-shirt.
"Whatever. At least go and buy some sugar for Amy."
"Aunt Amanda is making a cake?"
"Yep. Now go."
"Right away! Her cakes are the best!" I said, exiting the warehouse.
Outside, there was a large courtyard, full of thousands kinds of different plants. There, next to the warehouse, was a big, old fashion house. The black metal fence was covered in climbing ivy.
I got out on the gate and I looked at the dusty road and the old shop across it. I went into the shop. Behind the counter was a short, bald old man with some round-framed glasses and a white moustache.
"Oh, you must be Alice, Ray's and Amy's niece!" the old man said. "My name is Sam, and I'm glad to meet you."
"Yeah...Nice to meet you too...Can you give me some sugar please?" I asked.
"Here you go. One pound, please."
I took the sugar and I gave him the money, then left.
"Oh, what do we have here?...A new girl in my village?" said a tall guy, probably of my age.
Unlike his friends - three guys wearing overalls - he was wearing blue-jeans and a gray T-shirt. I didn't like the way he said "my village".
"What's your name, kid?"
"That's not your business, you loser!" I replied.
"Oh, so the new girl is brave? My name is Joshua and I control everything here. So, I ask you one more time: what's your name?"
"And I tell you one more time that my name is not your business." I said again, entering the courtyard.