16-02-2011, 04:57 PM
Doamne , iar sunt ultime care scrie.Ar trebui sa fac un ceas care sa sune mereu sau sa stau 25 din 24 de ore pe contul meu ...
Oricum ... bun deci sa revenim, capitolul e nemaipomenit, il ador. Partea trista a povestii este ca s-a terminat capitolul asa de repede, suspansul ma ucide (chiar daca acest capitol este nou :love: ), stiu cat de greu se scrie un capitol (mai ales ca nici nu prea a timp).
Ochisorii mei nu au cautat greseli de ortografie si ca urmare nici nu au gasit. Descrierea, naratiunea si dialogul au fost excelente.
Oricum ... bun deci sa revenim, capitolul e nemaipomenit, il ador. Partea trista a povestii este ca s-a terminat capitolul asa de repede, suspansul ma ucide (chiar daca acest capitol este nou :love: ), stiu cat de greu se scrie un capitol (mai ales ca nici nu prea a timp).
Ochisorii mei nu au cautat greseli de ortografie si ca urmare nici nu au gasit. Descrierea, naratiunea si dialogul au fost excelente.
Pupici multi si dulci pentru autoarea care e si ea o dulce.
Iti doresc muuuuuuuuuuuuuulta, chiar foarte muuuuuuuuuuulta imaginatie pentru next!
"I'm crying inside and nobody know it but me."
„Comparisons are easily done
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
"
"Another head hangs lowly, Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "