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We will still be friends forever despite difficulties

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deaja=deja
dar daca sai s ail=dar daca stai sa il *asta cred ca ai vrut sa scrii :D
s ail vizitez=sa il vizitez
baat=baiat.
Ok, so astea sunt greselile de tastare pe care le-am vazut. Saraca Sakura, era extenuata. Anywho.
Putin mai mult dialog nu ar strica, poti sa transformi naratiunea in vreo doua sau trei linii de dialog, nu ar strica. Descrierea baietilor mi-a placut, la fel si naratiunea desi e cam multa dupa parerea mea. Nu va grabiti cand il scrieti, desi vorbesc prostii, suntem plini de teme deja. Sooo gambatene si sper sa ma anuntati la urmatorul capitol. Sunt tare curioasa in legatura cu absolut tot. Ja ne !!!
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 31-12-2010, 01:54 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 02-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 04-01-2011, 04:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de DeDal N. - 07-01-2011, 08:34 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 09-01-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 13-01-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 14-01-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 22-01-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 23-01-2011, 07:56 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 29-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 30-01-2011, 08:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 05-02-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 06-02-2011, 11:42 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 11-02-2011, 11:16 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 20-02-2011, 10:54 PM

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