04-02-2011, 12:55 AM
hey, urmaresc de mult timp ficul tau si chiar imi place cum evoluezi (da eu vorbeam care am stricat un capitol de la ficul meu dar, sa ma lasam pe mine)
desrierea e buna, dialogul nu e sec si imi place mult cum descri, actiunea nu e grabita dar ai avut greseli de tastare, ori cum toata lumea are asa ceva, mai ales eu :">
nu am zis nimic pana acum pentru ca nu stiam ce sa zic si nu mi prea sta in fire dar, incercarea moarte n are.
daca te a deranjat comul meu sa mi spui
sunt incepatoare:)) :D
astept next ul si sper sa ma anunti :D
Ja ne!:*
desrierea e buna, dialogul nu e sec si imi place mult cum descri, actiunea nu e grabita dar ai avut greseli de tastare, ori cum toata lumea are asa ceva, mai ales eu :">
nu am zis nimic pana acum pentru ca nu stiam ce sa zic si nu mi prea sta in fire dar, incercarea moarte n are.
daca te a deranjat comul meu sa mi spui
sunt incepatoare:)) :D
astept next ul si sper sa ma anunti :D
Ja ne!:*
To the right, To the left, we will fight to the death
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To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
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I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
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To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1