Life Hurts

Life Hurts

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#17

21-01-2011, 11:16 PM

Dear Jesus, ce imi vad ochii. Huh.
Aaaaa, mie imi place dialogul, deci nu ai de ce sa te scuzi. Am intrat aici si cand am ajuns la partea cu 'aproape violul' am ramas socata. De ce, nu stiu. De toate.
Soooo, directorul acela, cu toate ca arat bine, nu are nici un drept sa o devoreze pe biata fata, ce nesimtire. Acum, sa revenim.
Nu am vazut greseli, doar ceva semne de punctuatie puse aiurea. Alea se pot repara usor. Nu ai multa descriere sau naratiune dar ai dialog si asta e un plus de la mine. Acele intrebari, hmm.
Imi place ultima propozitie.

Citat:Privesc cerul. Se intuneca...

Nu stiu de ce, dar imi pare ca fata incearca, chiar si fara voia ei sa treaca peste acest mic incident. Am dreptate?
Anywho, gambatene and Buh Bye !!!

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Life Hurts - de Addeh - 04-01-2011, 12:00 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Dufresne - 04-01-2011, 12:56 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 04-01-2011, 07:15 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 05-01-2011, 07:43 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de wonderCaT - 05-01-2011, 09:06 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de DeDal N. - 07-01-2011, 08:54 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de ultimate wulf - 07-01-2011, 10:32 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 08-01-2011, 02:11 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 08-01-2011, 07:36 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Beatrix LaVey - 09-01-2011, 04:01 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 12-01-2011, 08:56 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de wonderCaT - 12-01-2011, 11:09 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 16-01-2011, 03:51 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 16-01-2011, 04:08 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Beatrix LaVey - 16-01-2011, 04:14 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 21-01-2011, 11:04 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de DeDal N. - 21-01-2011, 11:16 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 22-01-2011, 03:05 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Dufresne - 29-01-2011, 08:56 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 30-01-2011, 04:53 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 30-01-2011, 05:07 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de DeDal N. - 30-01-2011, 05:11 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de wonderCaT - 30-01-2011, 07:49 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Dufresne - 30-01-2011, 11:13 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de n{iK}a aMmA - 30-01-2011, 11:18 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 17-02-2011, 11:55 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de DeDal N. - 17-02-2011, 07:20 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Katniss - 17-02-2011, 08:01 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 18-02-2011, 07:24 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Nixu - 18-02-2011, 08:31 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 05-03-2011, 01:34 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de DeDal N. - 05-03-2011, 01:58 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 05-03-2011, 02:58 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Rinnie - 05-03-2011, 03:32 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 07-03-2011, 01:42 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 07-03-2011, 02:07 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de ..Chris. - 07-03-2011, 02:15 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Nixu - 07-03-2011, 04:38 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Rinnie - 07-03-2011, 07:57 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de MiraA - 09-03-2011, 10:50 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 27-03-2011, 01:53 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 09-04-2011, 12:15 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 09-04-2011, 12:40 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Nixu - 09-04-2011, 06:40 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 10-04-2011, 02:06 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Katniss - 11-04-2011, 10:39 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de MiraA - 12-04-2011, 10:46 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 13-04-2011, 08:21 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 14-04-2011, 05:54 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Nixu - 14-04-2011, 06:25 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 14-04-2011, 06:38 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de ..Chris. - 19-04-2011, 11:03 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Zouly - 19-04-2011, 01:13 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 19-04-2011, 03:25 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de wonderCaT - 22-04-2011, 09:35 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 11-05-2011, 04:56 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Katniss - 11-05-2011, 05:45 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de ..Chris. - 11-05-2011, 08:19 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 15-05-2011, 10:19 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de SnowFlake. - 21-05-2011, 09:01 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 05-06-2011, 01:08 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Katniss - 05-06-2011, 02:20 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 05-06-2011, 08:50 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Flash - 05-06-2011, 11:05 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 24-06-2011, 11:43 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 05-07-2011, 05:35 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Nixu - 05-07-2011, 07:04 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 08-07-2011, 08:46 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Nixu - 08-07-2011, 11:40 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 19-07-2011, 02:00 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 24-07-2011, 09:14 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 03-08-2011, 07:23 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 04-08-2011, 09:12 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 07-08-2011, 11:20 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 08-08-2011, 12:39 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Miss M - 08-08-2011, 01:13 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 19-08-2011, 10:58 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Addeh - 07-09-2011, 11:14 AM

RE: Life Hurts - de Kayla. - 07-09-2011, 06:27 PM

RE: Life Hurts - de LoLix - 07-09-2011, 08:59 PM

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