How to love an angel

How to love an angel

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24-01-2010, 12:54 AM

deci... mai multa descriere te rog... mi-ar fi placut sa detaliezi mai mult ce sa intamplat in acea camera..
ai cateva greseli de tastare dar nimic grav, insa chiar nu pot sa ti le enumar acum... ma c-am prins somnul din urma...:( sorry.
un capitol frumos. imi place cum decurge actiunea, ai redus viteza fata de celalalt fic si asta este foarte bine, acum mai trebuie sa lucrezi la descriere si totul va fi absolut perfect.
Te astept sa vii cu un nou capitol cat poti tu de repede, sa nu ma faci sa astept, urasc sa astept:P
Bafta la scris!

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How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 28-12-2009, 11:34 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Emm` :x - 29-12-2009, 02:36 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 29-12-2009, 03:02 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 29-12-2009, 09:31 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 30-12-2009, 05:28 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 30-12-2009, 05:59 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 31-12-2009, 03:24 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de MisS.sAdiStic - 31-12-2009, 04:51 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 02-01-2010, 05:03 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 02-01-2010, 05:36 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de MisS.sAdiStic - 02-01-2010, 06:54 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 21-01-2010, 09:39 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 24-01-2010, 12:54 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de Just Sugar - 24-01-2010, 02:45 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Irukandji - 25-01-2010, 10:19 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 26-01-2010, 10:22 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Irukandji - 27-01-2010, 09:58 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 27-01-2010, 11:42 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de Just Sugar - 27-01-2010, 02:03 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Abbeh. - 27-01-2010, 04:51 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 27-01-2010, 08:04 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Obsession. - 29-01-2010, 11:09 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 06-02-2010, 09:15 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Irukandji - 06-02-2010, 10:34 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 06-02-2010, 10:57 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 13-02-2010, 01:52 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 13-02-2010, 02:31 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 13-02-2010, 08:43 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 18-02-2010, 09:08 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 20-02-2010, 12:13 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de Me†al. - 20-02-2010, 10:16 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Sushiiushii - 21-02-2010, 09:29 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 07-03-2010, 02:11 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 07-03-2010, 05:23 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Sushiiushii - 07-03-2010, 08:53 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 09-03-2010, 11:44 AM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 14-03-2010, 03:33 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 17-03-2010, 08:59 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 23-03-2010, 10:40 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 14-04-2010, 04:06 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 17-04-2010, 01:54 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Jasmine - 25-04-2010, 07:48 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Savarina Ali - 10-06-2010, 04:01 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 22-06-2010, 08:04 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Savarina Ali - 24-06-2010, 07:10 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Abbeh. - 24-06-2010, 08:22 PM

RE: How to love an angel - de Nixu - 15-02-2011, 08:16 PM

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