16-05-2009, 10:20 AM
interesant fic :)
am gasit cateva greseli :
"meiestoase"- maiestoase;
"Intr-un apartament (,) o adolescenta"
"un singur cuvat"- cuvant;
"sa vada dak"- daca;
" mov, o pereche do ochi blanzi, de un mov deschis"- ai repetat cuvantul "mov" in aceeasi fraza :(
"-Prieteni (,) nu va mai certati."
"- Iubire (,) ai iubit?"
"facndu-l"- facandu-l;
"ninpona"- nipona :-w :P
omg:)) Sasuke asta e foarte funny =))
spor la scris si sa pui nextu' repede :*:*
am gasit cateva greseli :
"meiestoase"- maiestoase;
"Intr-un apartament (,) o adolescenta"
"un singur cuvat"- cuvant;
"sa vada dak"- daca;
" mov, o pereche do ochi blanzi, de un mov deschis"- ai repetat cuvantul "mov" in aceeasi fraza :(
"-Prieteni (,) nu va mai certati."
"- Iubire (,) ai iubit?"
"facndu-l"- facandu-l;
"ninpona"- nipona :-w :P
omg:)) Sasuke asta e foarte funny =))
spor la scris si sa pui nextu' repede :*:*
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