O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

BlueGum
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#51

22-02-2009, 08:52 PM

nu e corect! trebuia sa fiu prima! lasa ca data viitoare eu voi fi ..hihihi
deci...sa trecem la subiect

imi place chiar foarte mult povestea ta si nu glumesc
imi place si ca nu ramai niciodata in pana de idei, scrii chiar foarte des in comparatie cu altii
am observat ca acum nu mai ai greseli de tastare(chiar daca se intampla sa se mai strecoare una) si nu mai grabesti actiunea...asta inseamna o adevarata imbunatatire
este foarte bine ca nu predomina dialogul si ca incepi sa descrii mai bine
chiar nu am ce critica, chiar daca intotdeauna exista loc de mai bine ;)
succes in continuare si spor la scris

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O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 12:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 02:46 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 17-01-2009, 04:34 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 09:39 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 01:44 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 18-01-2009, 02:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 11:02 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 11:37 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 02:23 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kiddy - 18-01-2009, 03:37 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 19-01-2009, 04:42 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 19-01-2009, 06:52 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 19-01-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 03:21 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 09:58 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 11:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 24-01-2009, 02:32 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 02:59 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 06:25 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 25-01-2009, 10:39 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 25-01-2009, 01:04 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 31-01-2009, 09:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 31-01-2009, 11:57 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 31-01-2009, 09:12 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 01-02-2009, 06:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 02-02-2009, 12:05 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kali?! - 02-02-2009, 03:43 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 02-02-2009, 07:39 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 03-02-2009, 02:56 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 04-02-2009, 10:02 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kido - 04-02-2009, 12:00 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 04-02-2009, 09:03 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 05-02-2009, 08:50 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 06-02-2009, 12:42 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Flash - 06-02-2009, 04:15 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 06-02-2009, 09:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 07-02-2009, 02:53 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 07-02-2009, 08:23 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Ryuu - 07-02-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 07-02-2009, 09:57 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 08-02-2009, 04:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 08-02-2009, 06:23 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 13-02-2009, 09:31 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 15-02-2009, 05:28 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 20-02-2009, 10:43 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 20-02-2009, 10:55 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 21-02-2009, 12:30 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 21-02-2009, 09:44 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Alexi - 21-02-2009, 10:00 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 21-02-2009, 10:45 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 22-02-2009, 08:52 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 28-02-2009, 09:35 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 28-02-2009, 10:09 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 28-02-2009, 07:32 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Obsession. - 28-02-2009, 10:28 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 01-03-2009, 10:54 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Sasuke-love-forever-sakura - 07-03-2009, 03:12 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Who said i have to be normal - 09-03-2009, 10:06 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Khonsu - 13-03-2009, 03:20 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 13-03-2009, 07:13 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 13-03-2009, 10:16 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Sasuke-love-forever-sakura - 13-03-2009, 10:39 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de ~angelino~ - 14-03-2009, 03:30 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 15-03-2009, 10:38 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 16-03-2009, 08:17 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de à®œSheirà®œ - 16-03-2009, 08:35 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 17-03-2009, 08:56 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 17-03-2009, 05:25 PM

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