O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

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17-01-2009, 04:34 PM

Suuuper povestea imi place foarte mult. Pot sa spun ca este destul de originala. Si mai ales o ador ca sunt la scoala.Pai, desi dialogul este bun pe alocuri mai trebuie putin imbinatatit, in ceea ce priveste descrierea nu ar strica ceva mai multa.Greseli ai foarte putine ceea ce este bine. Sper ca nu te superi pentru ce am spus. Sa stii ca ai o poveste foarte buna. Nu siu daca este primul tau fic, dar te pricepi si imi place.Succes in continuare si te rog continua cat mai repede ca sunt foarte curioasa. Oare Sakura este indragostita de Sasuke si Neji de ea? Apropo draguta ideea cu sora Sakurei si cu peietenii lui sasuke.Tine-o tot asa si te rog continua cat mai repede.

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O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 12:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 02:46 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 17-01-2009, 04:34 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 09:39 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 01:44 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 18-01-2009, 02:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 11:02 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 11:37 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 02:23 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kiddy - 18-01-2009, 03:37 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 19-01-2009, 04:42 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 19-01-2009, 06:52 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 19-01-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 03:21 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 09:58 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 11:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 24-01-2009, 02:32 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 02:59 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 25-01-2009, 10:39 AM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 31-01-2009, 09:25 AM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 06-02-2009, 12:42 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 06-02-2009, 09:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 07-02-2009, 02:53 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 13-02-2009, 09:31 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 15-02-2009, 05:28 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 20-02-2009, 10:43 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 22-02-2009, 08:52 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 28-02-2009, 09:35 AM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Who said i have to be normal - 09-03-2009, 10:06 AM

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