01-03-2011, 06:15 PM
wow intr-un final am citit si eu urmatorul capitol(sau subcapitol).
Imi place, il ador.
Ai uitat sa descrii fizic(si putin psihic ar trebui sa il descrii, nu e de ajuns sa deduca ceilalti ca este confuz si mai singuratic) baiatul misterios dupa care fetele sunt innebunite, care este prietenul lui Chase.
Descrierea e buna, te rog mai multe sentimente sau daca sunt putine descrierea mai amanuntita.
Naratiunea este buuuuna.
Dialogul nu este sec(felicitari).
Imi spui si mie te rog cand pui next-ul ?
Te rog:D
Ok bbye-bbye
Imi place, il ador.
Ai uitat sa descrii fizic(si putin psihic ar trebui sa il descrii, nu e de ajuns sa deduca ceilalti ca este confuz si mai singuratic) baiatul misterios dupa care fetele sunt innebunite, care este prietenul lui Chase.
Descrierea e buna, te rog mai multe sentimente sau daca sunt putine descrierea mai amanuntita.
Naratiunea este buuuuna.
Dialogul nu este sec(felicitari).
Imi spui si mie te rog cand pui next-ul ?
Te rog:D
Ok bbye-bbye
"I'm crying inside and nobody know it but me."
„Comparisons are easily done
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
"
"Another head hangs lowly, Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "