[Terminat] Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18]

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[Terminat] Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18]

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#33

08-05-2010, 09:56 PM (Ultima modificare: 29-06-2012, 02:00 PM {2} de Lexxu.)

Uite-ma si pe mine, doar nu credeai ca ignor noul capitol, nyu?

Sa revenim! Mi-a placut, actiunea a decurs bine, chiar m-a surprins sa vad ca Shin se da la Kaoru si am sperat si inca sper sa se intample ceva cat mai incitand. In momentul cand au ajuns la acea celula, a fost chiar uimitor. In cateva fraze ai reusit sa exprimi exact ceea ce se intampla si ce simtea Kaoru incredibil de intens.
Cum spuneam, doresc ca acest fic sa aibe faze cat mai dramatice. Parca fic-ul acesta, povestea in sine, cere mai multa drama, iar tu nu ii dai libertatea de a se arata. Sper sa vad scene cat mai uimitoare care sa-mi starneasca emotii induiosatoare.

Ups, am uitat de greseli, iata-le:
grijului - grijuliu
iun - in
momet - moment
indemnandu-ma - indemnandu-ma
incheturi - incheieturi
hilizesc - hlizesc

Gambatte si multa inspiratie!

~Thanks Rx~!~

Fa exact lucrul de care ti-e frica!

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[Terminat] Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 09-03-2010, 04:16 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Hetalia - 09-03-2010, 08:27 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Sushiiushii - 09-03-2010, 09:50 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Yaku-chin - 10-03-2010, 09:09 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Aliss_anime - 10-03-2010, 09:32 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de myuu - 11-03-2010, 01:30 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Yaoi Queen - 11-03-2010, 09:20 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Hetalia - 14-03-2010, 08:28 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de myuu - 15-03-2010, 02:05 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Yaoi Queen - 24-03-2010, 11:59 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Hetalia - 25-03-2010, 12:41 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de myuu - 25-03-2010, 12:47 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Aliss_anime - 25-03-2010, 08:40 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Yaoi Queen - 02-04-2010, 12:16 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de myuu - 02-04-2010, 12:20 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Serqet - 02-04-2010, 12:54 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Yaku-chin - 05-04-2010, 02:58 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Aliss_anime - 05-04-2010, 07:53 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Mitus - 12-04-2010, 05:24 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Yaoi Queen - 19-04-2010, 10:41 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de myuu - 19-04-2010, 11:44 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 20-04-2010, 09:42 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de AyameXx - 20-04-2010, 08:51 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Mitus - 21-04-2010, 04:23 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] - de Sushiiushii - 24-04-2010, 07:45 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MisS.sAdiStic - 02-05-2010, 10:40 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 03-05-2010, 11:15 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Serqet - 03-05-2010, 11:50 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MisS.sAdiStic - 04-05-2010, 05:17 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Kurama^_^Sweet - 06-05-2010, 12:16 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 08-05-2010, 06:13 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Faiery97 - 08-05-2010, 09:06 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MisS.sAdiStic - 08-05-2010, 09:56 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de myuu - 10-05-2010, 12:33 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 10-05-2010, 09:27 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 16-05-2010, 12:49 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MisS.sAdiStic - 16-05-2010, 08:58 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de myuu - 16-05-2010, 11:33 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Å¢iuÅŸcÄƒÄƒÄƒ - 18-05-2010, 04:09 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 24-05-2010, 01:33 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Toppi ã€Œã€Œãƒªãƒªã¡ã‚ƒã‚“ã€ã€ - 24-05-2010, 12:23 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MisS.sAdiStic - 24-05-2010, 03:29 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de myuu - 25-05-2010, 12:03 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 06-06-2010, 12:16 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Hetalia - 06-06-2010, 06:08 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de myuu - 07-06-2010, 10:41 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 07-06-2010, 11:10 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 07-06-2010, 05:24 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Aliss_anime - 12-06-2010, 01:02 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MisS.sAdiStic - 17-06-2010, 03:36 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de kame. - 22-06-2010, 04:41 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 27-06-2010, 11:17 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de kame. - 28-06-2010, 01:48 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Kurama^_^Sweet - 29-06-2010, 12:19 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 15-08-2010, 04:45 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 15-08-2010, 10:25 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 21-08-2010, 11:15 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Reveuse - 23-08-2010, 06:13 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Drama Queen - 12-09-2010, 02:03 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 22-09-2010, 09:31 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Aerith - 25-09-2010, 10:06 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 25-09-2010, 10:21 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Serqet - 25-09-2010, 10:26 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 25-09-2010, 10:38 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Aerith - 26-09-2010, 04:13 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Flash - 26-09-2010, 06:00 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 30-09-2010, 10:21 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MiraA - 30-09-2010, 10:45 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Kurama^_^Sweet - 01-10-2010, 12:18 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 01-10-2010, 06:53 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Drama Queen - 04-10-2010, 10:19 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Aerith - 07-10-2010, 01:50 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 02-11-2010, 08:18 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de DeDal N. - 02-11-2010, 09:49 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Marina. - 02-11-2010, 10:10 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Assyria - 02-11-2010, 11:16 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Drama Queen - 06-11-2010, 06:50 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Sybelle90 - 08-11-2010, 05:30 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Me_Samy - 09-11-2010, 02:34 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Kara - 10-11-2010, 09:01 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Beatrix LaVey - 10-11-2010, 11:21 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 21-11-2010, 12:17 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Marina. - 21-11-2010, 12:59 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Kara - 21-11-2010, 09:23 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MiraA - 22-11-2010, 06:15 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Beatrix LaVey - 22-11-2010, 09:03 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Drama Queen - 22-11-2010, 09:26 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 28-11-2010, 12:38 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de wasp - 28-11-2010, 04:31 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 08-12-2010, 06:56 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de wasp - 08-12-2010, 07:20 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Beatrix LaVey - 08-12-2010, 11:35 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 09-12-2010, 06:24 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de anime_addicted - 11-12-2010, 09:00 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Stormrage - 13-12-2010, 09:11 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de robsten - 15-12-2010, 09:10 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de wilma eelskin - 15-12-2010, 10:00 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 18-12-2010, 10:36 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de MiraA - 18-12-2010, 10:54 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Beatrix LaVey - 18-12-2010, 11:05 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Kurama^_^Sweet - 19-12-2010, 01:07 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de wilma eelskin - 19-12-2010, 08:14 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 19-12-2010, 11:25 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de anime_addicted - 19-12-2010, 05:22 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de wasp - 22-12-2010, 06:25 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de AyameXx - 28-12-2010, 02:24 AM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Yaoi Queen - 28-12-2010, 02:59 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de wilma eelskin - 28-12-2010, 03:24 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Beatrix LaVey - 28-12-2010, 05:36 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] - de Addeh - 28-12-2010, 05:47 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] -Complet- - de wasp - 29-12-2010, 08:24 PM

RE: Let Me Be... Your Guardian [*YAOI*] [+18] -Complet- - de AyameXx - 08-01-2011, 03:54 AM

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