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Do you love me?

#58
Oh, am citit si am sa si comentez - cunosc sentimentul ala frustrant in care ai cititori, dar prea putini care-si lasa si parerea : )). Ti-am citit si primul fic, nu-mi mai amintesc daca l-am comentat si pe acela, dar iti spun aici ca mi-a placut mult. Si asta-mi place mult. Trebuie sa recunosc ca ai o imaginatie bogata si scrii bine, imi plac capitolele tale, totul decurge frumos, fara descriere excesiva sau mai stiu eu ce. Personajele sunt frumos structurate, imi place Emma, Seth, imi place si ce s-a intamplat cu Isabella, faptul ca nu e asa o "bitch" cum o consideram ... Desi recunosc ca cel mai mult mi-au atras atentia Alice si Jack - cum era normal, probabil.
Mai, nu am sa ma leg de greseli de tastare, virgule si alte chestii dintr-astea acum, ca ma doare prea mult capul si nu am chef, dar am sa-ti spun asa, repede, ca, pe alocuri, iti lipsesc virgule.
Anyway, astept urmatorul capitol >:D< Spor la scris.



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Do you love me? - de Alexi - 07-02-2012, 04:18 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Death Rose - 07-02-2012, 04:42 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Katniss - 07-02-2012, 07:37 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de CyBeR - 07-02-2012, 11:56 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 10-02-2012, 08:59 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 18-02-2012, 09:03 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 29-02-2012, 05:27 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Maria - 07-03-2012, 08:07 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 10-03-2012, 04:49 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Maria - 15-03-2012, 10:44 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 15-03-2012, 11:48 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 16-03-2012, 08:08 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 16-03-2012, 12:55 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Maria - 16-03-2012, 09:14 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 29-03-2012, 12:45 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Zuzy Is Angell - 30-03-2012, 10:40 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 07-04-2012, 11:16 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 12-04-2012, 06:40 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 12-04-2012, 09:11 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 18-04-2012, 05:32 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 18-04-2012, 10:27 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Sushi - 19-04-2012, 01:40 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 19-04-2012, 04:21 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 19-04-2012, 05:16 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Maria - 19-04-2012, 07:40 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 29-04-2012, 05:17 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 30-04-2012, 10:50 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 01-05-2012, 06:57 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 01-05-2012, 09:04 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 03-05-2012, 09:53 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 04-05-2012, 01:36 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Zuzy Is Angell - 04-05-2012, 09:40 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 11-05-2012, 08:02 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 11-05-2012, 08:56 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Zuzy Is Angell - 11-05-2012, 09:17 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 16-05-2012, 07:03 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 17-05-2012, 04:09 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 19-05-2012, 06:06 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 19-05-2012, 10:21 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 26-05-2012, 12:04 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 26-05-2012, 12:32 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Zuzy Is Angell - 26-05-2012, 09:42 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 27-05-2012, 07:38 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 27-05-2012, 09:42 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 09-06-2012, 07:59 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lara - 24-06-2012, 01:17 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 25-06-2012, 09:10 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lara - 03-07-2012, 09:23 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 03-07-2012, 07:34 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lara - 04-07-2012, 12:13 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 13-07-2012, 09:46 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lara - 16-07-2012, 05:11 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Erdna - 17-07-2012, 10:50 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 09-08-2012, 11:56 AM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lara - 09-08-2012, 05:26 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 13-08-2012, 09:06 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lexxu - 16-08-2012, 12:49 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Abbeh. - 19-08-2012, 03:25 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 22-08-2012, 07:43 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lexxu - 22-08-2012, 09:50 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Lara - 08-09-2012, 12:28 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 19-09-2012, 05:30 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 14-10-2012, 03:39 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de leoaica - 19-10-2012, 06:50 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 08-11-2012, 08:28 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Zuzy Is Angell - 18-11-2012, 08:14 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 19-12-2012, 06:41 PM
RE: Do you love me? - de Alexi - 21-02-2013, 07:07 PM


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