Cerere de Critics

Cerere de Critics

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#213

24-01-2012, 10:29 PM

Nick:onu'
Link la fic:http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=29013
Pagina din topic a capitolului/Tot ficul:Tot (curaj)
Numar capitole [pana la momentul actual]:4
Sectiunea [Naruto, Yaoi/Yuri, Proza, Poezie]:yaoi
Alte date*:critica avansata (vreau sa ma perfectionez)

Stiu ca s-ar putea sa va sperie patru capitole dar aruncati un ochi sa vedeti cat de scurte sunt. Hmm, ar ma fi ceva de spus... am mai postat odata la acesta sectiune acelasi fic. Persoana care mi-a preluat cererea are mici dificultati, prin urmare nu poate comenta. Se ofera altcineva?

Priveste in ochii mei. Nu poti vedea, am dreptate?
Valul negru atarna greoi peste retina... aparenta... cât de mult timp ti-ai sacrifica sa descoperi esenta?

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Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 10-10-2011, 04:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ada - 10-10-2011, 06:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 10-10-2011, 06:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 10-10-2011, 06:54 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 10-10-2011, 06:55 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 10-10-2011, 10:18 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 10-10-2011, 10:34 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 10-10-2011, 10:42 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de crazy little red - 11-10-2011, 04:10 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 11-10-2011, 04:39 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lithium-Angel - 11-10-2011, 06:05 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 11-10-2011, 08:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-10-2011, 08:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 22-10-2011, 06:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de ^Ciresica^ - 22-10-2011, 08:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Anna - 22-10-2011, 08:39 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 22-10-2011, 08:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 22-10-2011, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-10-2011, 09:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 22-10-2011, 09:31 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 22-10-2011, 10:05 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-10-2011, 10:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 09:59 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 23-10-2011, 11:22 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 23-10-2011, 11:28 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 23-10-2011, 03:55 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 23-10-2011, 04:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 23-10-2011, 05:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 06:27 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 10:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 23-10-2011, 10:53 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 23-10-2011, 11:09 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 11:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 11:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 11:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 11:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Leontina - 24-10-2011, 10:07 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 24-10-2011, 10:12 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 09-11-2011, 09:58 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 09-11-2011, 10:20 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 12:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 24-10-2011, 12:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 01:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de i Ramenn. - 24-10-2011, 05:36 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 24-10-2011, 05:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 08:53 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 24-10-2011, 08:53 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 25-10-2011, 10:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 24-10-2011, 09:01 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Beatrix LaVey - 24-10-2011, 09:28 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 24-10-2011, 09:31 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 24-10-2011, 09:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 25-10-2011, 09:09 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Crissu'Blacker - 25-10-2011, 02:55 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 25-10-2011, 05:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 25-10-2011, 10:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de LLC - 26-10-2011, 02:44 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 26-10-2011, 10:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 26-10-2011, 10:27 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 26-10-2011, 01:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 26-10-2011, 04:16 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 26-10-2011, 05:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 26-10-2011, 05:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-10-2011, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-10-2011, 09:27 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 26-10-2011, 09:33 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-10-2011, 10:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-10-2011, 09:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 26-10-2011, 09:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 26-10-2011, 10:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 26-10-2011, 11:06 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 11:01 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-10-2011, 07:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 27-10-2011, 09:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 27-10-2011, 08:37 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 27-10-2011, 09:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-10-2011, 09:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Serqet - 27-10-2011, 10:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 27-10-2011, 10:20 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 27-10-2011, 10:33 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 27-10-2011, 10:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mariah . - 29-10-2011, 07:49 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Pequax - 29-10-2011, 08:00 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 29-10-2011, 08:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 29-10-2011, 08:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Katniss - 30-10-2011, 02:33 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 30-10-2011, 02:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Too Many Dreams. - 30-10-2011, 03:57 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 30-10-2011, 04:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 30-10-2011, 09:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 30-10-2011, 09:46 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 05-11-2011, 01:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 06-11-2011, 12:30 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 06-11-2011, 12:52 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 07-11-2011, 09:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 07-11-2011, 10:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 08-11-2011, 12:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 08-11-2011, 01:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 08-11-2011, 03:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 09-11-2011, 09:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 09-11-2011, 11:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 12-11-2011, 01:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 19-12-2011, 10:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Autumn. - 12-11-2011, 01:20 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 12-11-2011, 02:19 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 02:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 13-11-2011, 02:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 09:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 19-11-2011, 11:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 02:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 03:07 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 17-11-2011, 01:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 03:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 18-11-2011, 09:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Robb' - 19-11-2011, 12:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 19-11-2011, 12:34 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 19-11-2011, 01:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-11-2011, 05:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 19-11-2011, 06:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 19-11-2011, 06:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 19-11-2011, 08:47 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-11-2011, 10:12 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de sakura_sasuke - 20-11-2011, 06:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 20-11-2011, 06:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 20-11-2011, 10:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de i Ramenn. - 21-11-2011, 07:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 21-11-2011, 07:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 21-11-2011, 08:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de curcubeu fara culori - 04-12-2011, 01:52 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 04-12-2011, 11:04 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 09-12-2011, 01:49 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 09-12-2011, 04:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 14-12-2011, 11:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 09-12-2011, 05:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 09-12-2011, 08:28 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 12:11 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 15-12-2011, 12:39 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 15-12-2011, 04:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Julliette . - 15-12-2011, 05:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 07:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Saravis - 15-12-2011, 07:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 08:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 15-12-2011, 09:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 15-12-2011, 09:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 18-12-2011, 03:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-12-2011, 10:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de mailin - 20-12-2011, 10:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 21-12-2011, 12:03 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 21-12-2011, 12:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Amy :3 - 21-12-2011, 04:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 21-12-2011, 08:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 22-12-2011, 09:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 29-12-2011, 06:11 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Axel . - 22-12-2011, 09:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 22-12-2011, 11:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 23-12-2011, 03:25 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lucifer - 26-12-2011, 01:01 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-12-2011, 01:17 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lucifer - 10-01-2012, 12:08 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-12-2011, 02:41 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mad Hatter - 27-12-2011, 04:16 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 27-12-2011, 11:25 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Saravis - 27-12-2011, 02:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 27-12-2011, 03:05 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de YuneSugihara - 27-12-2011, 03:16 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-12-2011, 04:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Alle - 27-12-2011, 11:21 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 28-12-2011, 01:20 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 29-12-2011, 05:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Katniss - 29-12-2011, 06:58 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Niska - 30-12-2011, 01:16 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Anna - 31-12-2011, 12:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 02-01-2012, 12:54 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 31-12-2011, 04:09 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 31-12-2011, 04:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Flash - 31-12-2011, 05:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 31-12-2011, 06:38 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 02-01-2012, 05:10 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 02-01-2012, 09:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 11-01-2012, 01:03 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-01-2012, 03:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Flash - 03-01-2012, 12:03 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 03-01-2012, 01:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 03-01-2012, 01:58 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 03-01-2012, 03:54 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 07-01-2012, 02:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 07-01-2012, 05:49 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 07-01-2012, 07:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Kimera - 07-01-2012, 11:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Leontina - 10-01-2012, 10:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Eve. - 10-01-2012, 11:03 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 10-01-2012, 11:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de crazy little red - 13-01-2012, 02:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 20-01-2012, 10:28 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-01-2012, 04:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ada - 21-01-2012, 06:42 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 21-01-2012, 09:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 21-01-2012, 10:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 21-01-2012, 11:34 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 24-01-2012, 10:35 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 22-01-2012, 02:47 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 22-01-2012, 09:10 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 03-02-2012, 11:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 22-01-2012, 10:12 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 23-01-2012, 02:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 23-01-2012, 09:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 23-01-2012, 09:46 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 24-01-2012, 02:21 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 24-01-2012, 09:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 05-02-2012, 11:01 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 24-01-2012, 06:17 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 24-01-2012, 10:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-01-2012, 04:16 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 29-01-2012, 09:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 29-01-2012, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mad Hatter - 29-01-2012, 09:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 29-01-2012, 10:03 PM

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RE: Cerere de Critics - de *|Dea|* - 05-02-2012, 02:09 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 05-02-2012, 02:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de YuneSugihara - 11-02-2012, 08:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-02-2012, 08:41 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-02-2012, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 11-02-2012, 09:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-02-2012, 10:39 PM

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RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 22-02-2012, 10:12 PM

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RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 01-03-2012, 11:07 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 05-03-2012, 08:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 06-03-2012, 04:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Diabla - 08-03-2012, 10:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-03-2012, 08:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 11-03-2012, 08:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 11-03-2012, 08:36 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 11-03-2012, 08:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 11-03-2012, 09:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-03-2012, 09:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 11-03-2012, 09:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-03-2012, 09:27 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 12-03-2012, 07:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 12-03-2012, 10:12 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 14-03-2012, 10:37 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 15-03-2012, 05:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hero1hero - 09-07-2012, 10:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 09-07-2012, 10:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Thomas - 13-07-2012, 11:45 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 13-07-2012, 12:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Erdna - 13-07-2012, 02:40 PM

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