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#179

02-01-2012, 12:54 PM

(31-12-2011, 12:11 AM)Camille. A scris: Nick:Camille
Link la fic:http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=28318 Umanity and Sacrifce
Pagina din topic a capitolului/Tot ficul: Tot ficul/va rog frumos.
Numar capitole [pana la momentul actual]:3 capitole
Sectiunea [Naruto, Yaoi/Yuri, Proza, Poezie]:Proza

Nick: Camille.
Link la fic: http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=28191 Anarchy in School[naruto][+18]
Pagina din topic a capitolului/Tot ficul: Tot ficul.
Numar capitole [pana la momentul actual]: 5[fara prolog]
Sectiunea [Naruto, Yaoi/Yuri, Proza, Poezie]: Naruto.

I'm back! Ma simt mult mai in stare acum sa critic decat atunci. Well, iti voi lua eu cele doua ficuri. Nu promit cand vor fi gata, dar sper ca destul de repede.

PS: Am si eu o comanda :3

Nick: ThÑ”ory.
Link la fic: http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=26749
Pagina din topic a capitolului/Tot ficul: Pagina 10, capitolul 20.
Numar capitole [pana la momentul actual]: 20
Sectiunea [Naruto, Yaoi/Yuri, Proza, Poezie]: Yaoi/Yuri
Alte date: Nu am mai scris de mult la ficul asta si acum ca am pus capitolul mi se pare ceva ciudat cu actiunea. So... Critica vreau sa fie bazata mai mult pe actiune si personaje. Thx!

be special, be you.
Fani forgot her stamp here! ^w^

EDIT: Cu primul fic am terminat.

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