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Domination by [+16] [yaoi]

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#4
06-10-2008, 09:57 AM
eeee imi place mult de tot.
Este incredibila continuarea si astept nextu sper sa fie
cat ami repede.Am opervat ca nu prea pui virgule.La inceput acolo iti lipsete vreo doua sau trei virgulite, dar nu este chiar asa de important.Se poate rezolva.Dialogul est ebun si sper sa continuatie.

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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Domination by [+16] [yaoi] - de Lye - 03-10-2008, 10:43 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 06-10-2008, 04:40 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Flash - 06-10-2008, 09:57 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 10-10-2008, 05:16 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 25-10-2008, 02:13 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Cri$tin@ - 25-10-2008, 04:44 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 29-10-2008, 10:26 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 04-11-2008, 05:02 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de ank_anime - 10-11-2008, 11:02 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 17-11-2008, 04:10 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 01-12-2008, 07:00 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 19-12-2008, 02:16 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Aiumy - 03-01-2009, 12:40 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de sweet_zoey - 20-01-2009, 07:28 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de MisS.sAdiStic - 21-01-2009, 11:29 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Lye - 22-01-2009, 05:46 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Alysu - 22-01-2009, 08:07 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de myuu - 23-01-2009, 09:53 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Kido - 23-01-2009, 03:34 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de MisS.sAdiStic - 23-01-2009, 07:50 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de dia_love_gackt - 23-01-2009, 09:20 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Child Of Sunset - 27-01-2009, 04:41 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Lye - 03-03-2009, 01:58 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Yaku-chin - 03-03-2009, 12:42 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Kitsune's Iris - 11-03-2009, 04:05 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de dia_love_gackt - 11-03-2009, 08:59 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de chrissta - 02-04-2009, 10:06 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Dark~Melody - 14-06-2009, 12:57 PM

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