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[Terminat] The Way We Are [yaoi]

Mitus

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#82

13-04-2010, 04:09 PM

Hello
Am ajuns intr-un tarziu si aici

Va descurcati de minune, greseli de ortografie nu prea aveti, insa am observat in cateva locuri unele repetitii mai suparatoare... Uite un exemplu:
*Yu imi ridica picioarele, asezandu-le pe umerii sai pentru ma patrunde mai usor, iar eu ma agat de umerii sai,parca vrand sa ma tin ancorat in realitate. *
Puteai sa inlocuiesti ultimul "umerii sai" cu "el" sau nu stiu orice altceva

nvm:]] Oricum capitolul a fost superb asa ca trecem peste

Defapt nu numai capitolul acesta ci toata povestea este minunata. Imi place cum evolueaza situatia intre cei doi. E mult mai bine asa, incet dar sigur. Cateodata ma gandesc ca ar fi mult mai bine daca cei doi ar recunoaste cat mai repede posibil ce simt unul fata de celalalt, dar dupa aia imi dau seama ca e mai frumos asa, daca lucrurile nu se complica un pic nu are nici un farmec. Sunt totusi foarte curioasa ce se va intampla in continuare asa ca Myuu pune-te pe scris pentru ca moi are nevoie sa citeasca ceva yaoi si asta cat mai repede:]]
Gambate pupic

Cius
:bye:

To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all.

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[Terminat] The Way We Are [yaoi] - de Yaoi Queen - 29-10-2009, 09:53 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way we are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 29-10-2009, 10:19 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 30-10-2009, 12:33 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aliss_anime - 30-10-2009, 05:50 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de chrissta - 30-10-2009, 06:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 30-10-2009, 10:53 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Kripterya - 31-10-2009, 03:30 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Namine - 06-11-2009, 01:04 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 07-11-2009, 01:05 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 07-11-2009, 01:48 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yukira1234 - 07-11-2009, 04:53 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 08-11-2009, 01:15 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 09-11-2009, 01:13 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 13-11-2009, 11:55 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Namine - 14-11-2009, 12:25 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 14-11-2009, 05:23 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 19-11-2009, 11:42 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Namine - 20-11-2009, 12:17 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 20-11-2009, 03:00 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 27-11-2009, 10:19 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 28-11-2009, 02:42 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de I hate maths. - 28-11-2009, 02:31 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 28-11-2009, 04:59 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 08-12-2009, 11:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 09-12-2009, 12:54 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitsukai Yoru - 09-12-2009, 01:58 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 11-12-2009, 09:42 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Sushiiushii - 11-12-2009, 08:08 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 12-12-2009, 04:22 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 12-12-2009, 10:44 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 13-12-2009, 03:35 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 13-12-2009, 11:43 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 13-12-2009, 02:12 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de I hate maths. - 13-12-2009, 06:45 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 16-12-2009, 07:53 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 26-12-2009, 12:03 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de adyna_45 - 26-12-2009, 03:20 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 26-12-2009, 10:37 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ReDsWeEtLoVeAlExA - 27-12-2009, 03:47 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 28-12-2009, 04:03 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 30-12-2009, 01:17 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 30-12-2009, 12:29 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 01-01-2010, 04:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 01-01-2010, 07:13 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 01-01-2010, 09:36 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de MaDyY - 04-01-2010, 10:27 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 06-01-2010, 12:14 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 08-01-2010, 08:08 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Sol - 08-01-2010, 10:37 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 09-01-2010, 12:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Summer - 10-01-2010, 10:03 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 17-01-2010, 09:10 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 17-01-2010, 11:17 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 17-01-2010, 11:18 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 18-01-2010, 12:06 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 24-01-2010, 09:57 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 25-01-2010, 12:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 05-02-2010, 05:23 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 07-02-2010, 12:38 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 07-02-2010, 03:03 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 10-02-2010, 11:39 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 12-02-2010, 12:09 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 13-02-2010, 07:47 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 15-02-2010, 11:31 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 17-02-2010, 10:05 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 18-02-2010, 07:35 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 20-02-2010, 12:51 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 21-02-2010, 11:06 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 21-02-2010, 10:39 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -Kanameâ™¥Gackt- - 03-03-2010, 10:45 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 08-03-2010, 02:55 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 16-03-2010, 12:09 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 16-03-2010, 05:58 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 17-03-2010, 09:31 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 21-03-2010, 01:23 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Denny - 21-03-2010, 08:49 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 27-03-2010, 08:36 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 28-03-2010, 01:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 28-03-2010, 09:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 07-04-2010, 11:14 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 10-04-2010, 10:30 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 13-04-2010, 04:09 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 21-04-2010, 10:46 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ThorthKa - 22-04-2010, 05:38 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 24-04-2010, 12:57 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 25-04-2010, 10:18 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 26-04-2010, 02:42 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 28-04-2010, 05:25 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 28-04-2010, 10:07 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 30-04-2010, 10:21 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 05-05-2010, 10:28 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 06-05-2010, 09:37 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 09-05-2010, 01:37 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 09-05-2010, 02:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 09-05-2010, 04:15 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 13-05-2010, 10:45 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 15-05-2010, 07:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 16-05-2010, 06:14 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Å¢iuÅŸcÄƒÄƒÄƒ - 18-05-2010, 03:37 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de anime_addicted - 20-05-2010, 08:44 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BlackBunny - 21-05-2010, 07:43 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 22-05-2010, 11:24 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BlackBunny - 23-05-2010, 12:04 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de anime_addicted - 23-05-2010, 01:27 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Å¢iuÅŸcÄƒÄƒÄƒ - 23-05-2010, 03:16 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de .B!g BaNg~ - 23-05-2010, 03:47 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 24-05-2010, 11:59 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 24-05-2010, 01:23 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 02-06-2010, 12:05 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de .B!g BaNg~ - 02-06-2010, 01:34 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 07-06-2010, 11:38 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 11-06-2010, 04:03 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 16-06-2010, 10:39 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de anime_addicted - 17-06-2010, 02:54 PM

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RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 19-06-2010, 12:58 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BlackBunny - 19-06-2010, 05:27 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Claribel - 09-07-2010, 06:55 PM

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RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aly - 09-07-2010, 05:14 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BLooregard - 17-07-2010, 07:14 PM

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