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Aripi insangerate

marya

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#54

06-02-2010, 03:36 PM

Pff.....de cand nu am mai trecut pe aici, cate capitole am pierdut.....dar nu-ti fa griji am recuperat :D

Toate capitolele au fost bune, actiunea a decurs ca unsa, descrierea a fost minunata, ai descris foarte bine sentimentele personajelor ;) , dialogul nu a fost sec si s-a imbinat perfect cu celelalte moduri de expunere....Am observat ca nu ai mai folosit atatea repetitii, Bravo!!!

Dorinta mi s-a indeplinit si Ikusa cu Yuri sunt in sfarsit impreuna :X....Chiar ma intrebam cat o sa mai dureze pana cand cei doi isi vor marturisii sentimentele....Imi place si celalalt cuplu format din sora lui Yuri si Hissori.....Ma intreb ce se va intampla mai departe, acum ca cei doi sunt impreuna.....

Sper sa revii cu continuarea si scuze ca nu am mai comentat, dar am fost foarte ocupata cu scoala si altele, am un an foarte incarcat.....Bafta in continuarea si grabeste-te! Bye bye :*:*:*:*

, chibi-ul lui marya02

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Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 06:29 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 11:08 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de ~X~LoVeLeSs~X~ - 16-09-2009, 10:29 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 19-09-2009, 10:21 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Zyspar - 20-09-2009, 12:24 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-09-2009, 10:20 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-09-2009, 02:23 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-09-2009, 09:56 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-09-2009, 08:53 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 02-10-2009, 04:31 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-10-2009, 10:32 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-10-2009, 10:38 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-10-2009, 10:09 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-10-2009, 09:29 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-10-2009, 02:26 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-10-2009, 12:44 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-10-2009, 01:12 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-11-2009, 03:30 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-11-2009, 05:56 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-11-2009, 08:09 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-11-2009, 12:45 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-11-2009, 01:53 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 25-11-2009, 03:05 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 30-11-2009, 02:30 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-12-2009, 01:30 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-12-2009, 04:28 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 04-12-2009, 04:09 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-12-2009, 11:12 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 07-12-2009, 09:42 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-12-2009, 03:35 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-12-2009, 02:41 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 14-12-2009, 06:11 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-12-2009, 11:34 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 16-12-2009, 08:47 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-12-2009, 12:33 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2009, 03:21 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2009, 12:51 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 22-12-2009, 11:42 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de A'Svear - 23-12-2009, 08:34 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 24-12-2009, 02:08 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-12-2009, 05:14 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 25-12-2009, 12:14 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-12-2009, 02:09 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 26-12-2009, 03:17 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-12-2009, 01:38 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 29-12-2009, 07:34 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 30-12-2009, 03:56 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-01-2010, 12:37 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 15-01-2010, 08:26 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-01-2010, 11:34 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-01-2010, 11:29 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-02-2010, 02:19 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 06-02-2010, 12:52 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de marya - 06-02-2010, 03:36 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Aly - 10-02-2010, 02:51 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-02-2010, 08:24 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 12-02-2010, 11:20 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-02-2010, 01:48 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 19-02-2010, 11:07 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-03-2010, 05:44 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 11-03-2010, 10:37 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-03-2010, 07:36 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-03-2010, 01:34 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-03-2010, 02:19 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 01-04-2010, 12:06 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-04-2010, 10:35 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 09-04-2010, 04:20 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-04-2010, 03:31 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-04-2010, 12:38 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 17-04-2010, 12:56 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-04-2010, 05:34 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 22-04-2010, 03:34 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 22-04-2010, 05:35 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-04-2010, 07:06 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 03-05-2010, 06:05 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-05-2010, 09:06 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 11-05-2010, 09:30 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-06-2010, 08:41 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 04-06-2010, 04:54 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 05-06-2010, 04:07 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-06-2010, 01:27 AM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-07-2010, 02:55 AM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de dark.blue - 10-08-2010, 10:39 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-08-2010, 06:24 PM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 23-09-2010, 03:27 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 23-09-2010, 07:59 PM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 18-12-2010, 05:32 PM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 19-12-2010, 03:16 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2010, 11:18 PM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 21-12-2010, 07:53 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 22-12-2010, 09:38 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 24-12-2010, 02:24 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-01-2011, 12:11 AM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-05-2011, 07:37 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 04-05-2011, 08:43 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 29-05-2011, 09:26 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 13-06-2011, 07:00 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 13-06-2011, 10:27 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 15-06-2011, 09:21 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-07-2011, 02:54 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 06-07-2011, 04:25 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 16-07-2011, 01:14 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-08-2011, 07:19 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 21-08-2011, 03:06 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-09-2011, 05:01 PM

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RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2011, 03:38 PM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 07-02-2012, 12:35 AM

RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 08-02-2012, 01:46 AM

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