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More Than Love...[+16/+17]

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#63
15-08-2011, 02:33 PM
Elz - chan! Un capitol absolut minunat.

Ah, deci ce as putea spune? Ador ficul tau la nebunie! Este pur si simplu minunat. Uhm, lasand asta. Naratiune ai avut. Narezi foarte frumos. Dialogul.. au fost acolo doua replici, dar deloc neinteresante. Descrierea a fost superba! Cireasa de pe tort. Ai descris foarte frumos sentimentele lui Sasuke. Parca eram in mintea lui.. si vedeam ce simte. In fine.. greseli de tastare nu prea cred ca am vazut. Sincera sa fiu nici nu am fost atenta dupa ele. Actiunea decurge frumos si incet. Nu prea repede si nici prea incet. Totul merge absolut foarte bine. Aoleu! Sangereaza?! Sas'ke vezi ca tot pe tine dau vina! Stai asa.. o fi.. de la ce cred eu ca o fi? o.o In fine.. o-m trai si o-m vedea. ^^

Te astept cu nextu' dear Elz.
Bafta si multa, multa inspiratie in continuare. : ]
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 11:31 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 16-07-2011, 01:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 05:28 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 06:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-07-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de stylish.lov3 - 17-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 17-07-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-07-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-07-2011, 08:56 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-07-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 20-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 21-07-2011, 11:27 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 22-07-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 23-07-2011, 12:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 23-07-2011, 01:36 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 23-07-2011, 01:50 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 23-07-2011, 08:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 25-07-2011, 09:18 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 25-07-2011, 10:59 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 25-07-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-07-2011, 01:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 27-07-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 27-07-2011, 03:04 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 27-07-2011, 04:37 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 27-07-2011, 04:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Laura ♥ - 27-07-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-07-2011, 12:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 29-07-2011, 02:34 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 01-08-2011, 11:16 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 05-08-2011, 01:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 06-08-2011, 04:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 07-08-2011, 11:06 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 07-08-2011, 11:30 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 08-08-2011, 09:40 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 08-08-2011, 11:41 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 09-08-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 10-08-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 09:55 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 11-08-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 12-08-2011, 12:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 12-08-2011, 02:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 12-08-2011, 08:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 15-08-2011, 12:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 15-08-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 15-08-2011, 05:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-08-2011, 10:39 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-08-2011, 08:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 17-08-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Prevented :D - 18-08-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-08-2011, 10:34 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 19-08-2011, 02:43 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-08-2011, 07:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 20-08-2011, 11:26 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 22-08-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 24-08-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-08-2011, 04:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-08-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 29-08-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 31-08-2011, 11:01 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 31-08-2011, 03:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 02-09-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 02-09-2011, 04:13 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 03-09-2011, 07:02 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 03-09-2011, 07:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Lorely - 23-10-2011, 12:32 AM


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