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Auu. :)) Nepotico tu faci ficuri la original a?

Asa. Ti-am zis ca mi se pare interesanta ideea.
Ahh, pai a fost un inceput foarte frumos. Mie una mi-a placut. N-ai inceput cum ca se trezeste intr-o zi absolut superba de primvara si mai stiu eu ce. Urasc chestia asta. Deciii', ce as putea spune? Imi placeee. Ai descriere. Este sub comanda ta si te descuri bine cu ea. Naratiunea.. ai avut, n-am ce sa comentez la adresa ei. Narezi foarte frumos. Dialogul nu a fost sec chiar daca a fost putin. Sti sa-l folosesti foarte bine. Greseli de tastare n-ai avut.. sincera sa fiu nici macar nu m-am uitat dupa ele. ^^

Paiii', draga nepotica te astept cu capitolul urmator.
Bafta si muuuuuuu~lta inspiratie. :]
:bye:



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 19-03-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 20-03-2011, 01:01 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 20-03-2011, 01:37 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 20-03-2011, 11:05 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 20-03-2011, 11:18 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 20-03-2011, 12:27 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Mariah . - 20-03-2011, 12:46 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Freaky - 20-03-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 20-03-2011, 03:48 PM
RE: Sick independence - de DeDal N. - 20-03-2011, 04:04 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 20-03-2011, 04:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 20-03-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 20-03-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 20-03-2011, 07:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Sho-Yo - 20-03-2011, 09:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 21-03-2011, 08:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 21-03-2011, 09:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 21-03-2011, 09:34 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 21-03-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 21-03-2011, 11:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 21-03-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 22-03-2011, 12:16 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 22-03-2011, 12:34 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Yuki - 22-03-2011, 03:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 22-03-2011, 04:26 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 22-03-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 22-03-2011, 08:54 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 23-03-2011, 02:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 23-03-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 23-03-2011, 08:25 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 23-03-2011, 09:42 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 23-03-2011, 09:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 07:12 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 25-03-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 25-03-2011, 10:10 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 25-03-2011, 10:21 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 25-03-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 25-03-2011, 10:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 11:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Daria - 25-03-2011, 11:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 26-03-2011, 03:50 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 26-03-2011, 11:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 26-03-2011, 05:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 27-03-2011, 01:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 27-03-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 27-03-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 29-03-2011, 09:16 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 07-04-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 07-04-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 08-04-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Ich. - 08-04-2011, 09:35 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 08-04-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 08-04-2011, 06:27 PM


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