01-03-2011, 04:36 PM
Waaaa :X , dupa cum spun unii "ciment" :)):)) foarte frumos capitolul, imi place descrierea si naratiunea, dialogul nu e sec absolut deloc.
Greseli de ortografie nu am vazut si nici nu am cautat sa fiu sincera.
Faza cu Sasuke si roscata e totala (upss l-a prins cu mata-n sac) si chiar nu ma asteptam ca Itachi sa mearga dupa ea si toate alea...
Abea astept urmatorul. NEXT :X
Greseli de ortografie nu am vazut si nici nu am cautat sa fiu sincera.
Faza cu Sasuke si roscata e totala (upss l-a prins cu mata-n sac) si chiar nu ma asteptam ca Itachi sa mearga dupa ea si toate alea...
Abea astept urmatorul. NEXT :X
"I'm crying inside and nobody know it but me."
„Comparisons are easily done
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
"
"Another head hangs lowly, Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "