23-03-2010, 12:46 PM
Hei... am trecut si eu pe aici, se pare ca postarea mea sa strers.....da in fine , sa trecem la lucruri importante :D! Imi place fic-u vostru:X!!
Si cred ca cel care a sarutat-o era Shane , :)) ma intrb cumva va reactiona cand va afla el era chiar tipu de vizavi :)) ca de obicei A`Svear ma impresionezi :X Ador cum scrii :X Naratiune- e buna , descriere - destul de bine , dialogu- nu-i sec .... cateva greseli de tastare :D
nemuriarea- nemurirea
gâsit-găsit
înebuniţi- înnebuniţi
repiraţia- respiraţia
mutl- mult
P.S: Astept Next-u !Bafta si spor la scris!:>>:D<
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[center]~Muzica, Moda, Totul Despre LOVE & SEX
Seara de Seara , la cel mai Tare Chef!!
Nici nu am belele, de parinti in cot ma doare,
Vara asta-i cea mai tare si distractia e-n Floare!~
~ And I bet that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic
So let me drive my body around you
I bet you know what I mean
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic ~
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Si cred ca cel care a sarutat-o era Shane , :)) ma intrb cumva va reactiona cand va afla el era chiar tipu de vizavi :)) ca de obicei A`Svear ma impresionezi :X Ador cum scrii :X Naratiune- e buna , descriere - destul de bine , dialogu- nu-i sec .... cateva greseli de tastare :D
nemuriarea- nemurirea
gâsit-găsit
înebuniţi- înnebuniţi
repiraţia- respiraţia
mutl- mult
P.S: Astept Next-u !Bafta si spor la scris!:>>:D<
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[center]~Muzica, Moda, Totul Despre LOVE & SEX
Seara de Seara , la cel mai Tare Chef!!
Nici nu am belele, de parinti in cot ma doare,
Vara asta-i cea mai tare si distractia e-n Floare!~
~ And I bet that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic
So let me drive my body around you
I bet you know what I mean
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic ~
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"If I died in your arms
Would you then give me your love
Would you tell me that you need me
and that I was the one
Now there's nothing I can say to you
To make you feel the same way too
When you walk away I just want to die
And I try not to break down and cry"
Would you then give me your love
Would you tell me that you need me
and that I was the one
Now there's nothing I can say to you
To make you feel the same way too
When you walk away I just want to die
And I try not to break down and cry"