Rape me , my friend

Rape me , my friend

Addeh

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21-02-2011, 06:15 PM

Wow, deci am aterizat exact la timp. Off, si de ce a trebuit sa te opresti? :o3 Oricum, sunt sigura ca vei aduce continuare curand, atat la propriu cat si la figurat. :> Faza cu telefonul pierdut mi s-a parut copilararos, dar poate ca asta face ficul mai interesant.
Am observat cateva greseli de exprimare, minore. Incearca sa folosesti mai multa descriere, si la dialog, bineinteles - pentru a parea mai "plin" sa spun...:-?
Mie imi place. Adu`ne capitolul. Bye bye

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Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 21-02-2011, 04:05 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 21-02-2011, 06:08 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 21-02-2011, 06:15 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de DeDal N. - 21-02-2011, 07:59 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 21-02-2011, 10:52 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Yaku-chin - 21-02-2011, 11:46 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Beatrix LaVey - 22-02-2011, 09:31 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 22-02-2011, 10:22 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 22-02-2011, 11:35 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 22-02-2011, 11:49 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 22-02-2011, 03:15 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de DeDal N. - 22-02-2011, 03:25 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Yaoi Queen - 22-02-2011, 05:59 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 22-02-2011, 08:54 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de hiimera - 22-02-2011, 10:09 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Yaku-chin - 22-02-2011, 11:00 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 22-02-2011, 11:10 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de hiimera - 22-02-2011, 11:31 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Yaku-chin - 22-02-2011, 11:35 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 23-02-2011, 11:01 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Drama Queen - 23-02-2011, 11:35 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 23-02-2011, 05:04 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 23-02-2011, 06:46 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 23-02-2011, 07:34 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de hiimera - 23-02-2011, 10:37 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Noesis - 23-02-2011, 11:09 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de MiraA - 23-02-2011, 11:10 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de kame. - 24-02-2011, 08:35 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 24-02-2011, 11:36 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de hiimera - 25-02-2011, 12:45 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 25-02-2011, 10:34 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 25-02-2011, 09:21 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 25-02-2011, 09:38 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 25-02-2011, 10:56 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Yaku-chin - 25-02-2011, 11:08 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 25-02-2011, 11:54 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de hiimera - 26-02-2011, 12:23 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Noesis - 26-02-2011, 12:57 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Moon princess - 26-02-2011, 01:29 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 26-02-2011, 07:56 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 26-02-2011, 08:21 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Yaoi Queen - 26-02-2011, 08:54 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 27-02-2011, 03:48 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 27-02-2011, 06:30 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 27-02-2011, 08:34 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 28-02-2011, 11:06 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de angel cat - 01-03-2011, 12:14 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 01-03-2011, 09:26 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 01-03-2011, 10:26 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 01-03-2011, 06:07 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de angel cat - 03-03-2011, 07:43 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Noesis - 01-03-2011, 07:00 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 01-03-2011, 07:23 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 01-03-2011, 10:17 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Rinnie - 03-03-2011, 05:24 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 03-03-2011, 09:48 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Yaku-chin - 03-03-2011, 10:54 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 05-03-2011, 11:43 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de angel cat - 05-03-2011, 06:40 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 05-03-2011, 07:18 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 06-03-2011, 04:01 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Rinnie - 06-03-2011, 04:14 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 06-03-2011, 05:17 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Noesis - 07-03-2011, 03:13 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 07-03-2011, 06:14 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de angel cat - 07-03-2011, 07:22 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Rinnie - 07-03-2011, 08:21 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Addeh - 07-03-2011, 09:00 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Lust. - 11-03-2011, 08:32 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Tiusca - 11-03-2011, 09:43 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de hiimera - 13-03-2011, 11:06 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de LoLix - 15-03-2011, 07:57 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de sape - 10-04-2011, 03:58 AM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de aurelyon - 22-04-2011, 07:11 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Eric - 22-05-2011, 06:48 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de aurelyon - 23-05-2011, 01:30 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de LoLix - 20-07-2011, 09:19 PM

RE: Rape me , my friend - de Kato - 06-11-2011, 08:16 PM

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