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Domination by [+16] [yaoi]

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#65
27-01-2009, 04:41 PM
In sfarsit citesc si eu un nou capitol....sa vedem ce greseli ai :

i somptuoasa - in somptuoasa
defapt - de fapt
numii - numi
alte persoana - asta m-a dat pe spate....faimoasa lye nu stie sa faca acordul... pentru numele lui Dumnezeu ( alte persoane )
spun e - spune
nici-un - niciun
devenii - deveni

Mai putine greseli decat de obicei , e binisor sa zicem . Revenind la idee , mi-a placut . Descrierea a fost frumoasa si abia astept ce se va intampla intre cei doi dupa ce se vor intoarce la Tokyo . Abia astept next-ul ! Gambate kudasai !
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Domination by [+16] [yaoi] - de Lye - 03-10-2008, 10:43 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 06-10-2008, 04:40 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 10-10-2008, 05:16 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 25-10-2008, 02:13 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Cri$tin@ - 25-10-2008, 04:44 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 29-10-2008, 10:26 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 04-11-2008, 05:02 PM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de ank_anime - 10-11-2008, 11:02 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 17-11-2008, 04:10 AM
RE: Domination by LYE & naruse_ryo(yaoi,+16) - de Naruse_Ryo - 01-12-2008, 07:00 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 19-12-2008, 02:16 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Aiumy - 03-01-2009, 12:40 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de sweet_zoey - 20-01-2009, 07:28 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de MisS.sAdiStic - 21-01-2009, 11:29 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Lye - 22-01-2009, 05:46 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Alysu - 22-01-2009, 08:07 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de myuu - 23-01-2009, 09:53 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Kido - 23-01-2009, 03:34 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de MisS.sAdiStic - 23-01-2009, 07:50 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de dia_love_gackt - 23-01-2009, 09:20 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Child Of Sunset - 27-01-2009, 04:41 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Lye - 03-03-2009, 01:58 AM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Yaku-chin - 03-03-2009, 12:42 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Kitsune's Iris - 11-03-2009, 04:05 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de dia_love_gackt - 11-03-2009, 08:59 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de chrissta - 02-04-2009, 10:06 PM
RE: Domination by (yaoi,+16) - de Dark~Melody - 14-06-2009, 12:57 PM

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