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Death Note: Rebirth

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The story gets better, I've read all of the 60 chapters. Wait and see girls.

I'm pretty much aware of your mistakes as I've signaled them to you eons ago when I've had the chance to read the entire thing, which is pretty long; I have to say so the supply of it for your new fans is quite nicely stocked.

It does improve along the way and at the end I was baffled by the swift turn of events, though I have to say that I remember nagging you about every simple mistake, which I did less and less as the story progressed.

You know what I think.

I want my two cents.
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probabil n-ai primit niciodata
telegramele mele sau poate
nu credeai ca e vital cand
lumea mea se descompunea
in ceasuri si goluri
de mine

au imbatranit in cadente
si sentimentele mele
sub greutatea
atator vieti netraite...


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Death Note: Rebirth - de Dantwyn - 05-06-2012, 04:04 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de Niska - 05-06-2012, 04:36 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de Dantwyn - 05-06-2012, 06:05 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de K.V. - 05-06-2012, 08:45 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de Lia - 05-06-2012, 08:49 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de Dantwyn - 05-06-2012, 08:56 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de K.V. - 05-06-2012, 10:11 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de Dantwyn - 05-06-2012, 10:37 PM
RE: Death Note: Rebirth - de Lia - 06-09-2012, 12:22 AM


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