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#49

08-04-2012, 10:46 AM

Am citit ambele capitole, yey! Ca deobicei imi plac foarte mult, faci o treaba minunata si nu am ce sa iti mai reprosez. Scrii frumos si chiar daca se mai ivesc cateva greseli minore de tastare, totul este foarte bine intr-o armonie melodica.
Ultimul dialog a lui Frankie daca ar fi sa-l restrang in doar doua cuvinte ar fi: "Te iubesc!" desigur i s-ar adresa lui Zack. Am impresia ca deja si Frankie e cam 'in love' dupa mititel. Owww, ceea ce mi se pare prea minunat, atat de dulce poate fi Zake, nici nu ma mira de ce reactioneaza asa Frankie, care pot spune ca este un personaj de milioane, l-ai construit foarte bine.
Ma intreb unde vor ajunge cei doi... ma intreb. *giggle*
Abia astept nextul, Gabi, succes. *hug*

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