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[Terminat] This feeling hurts so much

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#17

31-05-2011, 06:23 PM

Bun , sa vedem.

Nu sunt multe de adaugat, deoarece dupa cum bine stii nu sunt o adepta a analizei pe text. De aceea parerea mea este generala, conceptie pe care mi-am exprimat-o. Ca si la Funi, ma bucur ca atat imaginile artistice cat si figurile de stil sunt diversificate.
Limbajul reda lectorului atmosfera tensionata, atribuindu-i rolul de martor. Bineinteles, acest lucru ma captiveaza mereu.
Ideea inca ramane cu nota ridicata de originalitate, nereusind sa percep finalul. Inca un atu pe care tu, ca si scriitoare, il detii.
Am oportunitatea de a-ti admira stilul ales, acesta modelandu-se conform caracterului tau real (iti da ocazia de a te exprima liber, captand atentia userului).

Un alt punct forte este si dialogul, ce completeaza capitolul si-l face mai amplu/complex.Fara el, cu toate ca te descurci de minune la descriere, totul ,dupa propria opinie, ar deveni monoton.

Dupa cum am si afirmat si inca sustin cu tarie, acest fic se incadreaza cu usurinta printre preferate !

Mult succes in continuare !

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[Terminat] This feeling hurts so much - de Rain - 23-05-2011, 07:07 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de .Dudiii - 23-05-2011, 07:32 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 23-05-2011, 08:15 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Ellys - 23-05-2011, 08:20 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 25-05-2011, 07:06 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 25-05-2011, 10:54 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 26-05-2011, 09:25 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de .Dudiii - 26-05-2011, 10:13 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 26-05-2011, 10:58 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 28-05-2011, 09:55 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 28-05-2011, 03:30 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 28-05-2011, 03:40 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 28-05-2011, 10:31 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 30-05-2011, 02:58 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 30-05-2011, 08:16 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 31-05-2011, 06:10 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 31-05-2011, 06:23 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 31-05-2011, 06:36 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 31-05-2011, 08:36 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 01-06-2011, 10:28 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 04-06-2011, 12:04 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 04-06-2011, 12:17 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 04-06-2011, 09:51 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 04-06-2011, 11:39 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 06-06-2011, 08:42 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 06-06-2011, 08:52 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 06-06-2011, 08:57 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de .Dudiii - 06-06-2011, 09:02 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 07-06-2011, 10:21 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 07-06-2011, 12:04 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Mizuki Lulu - 08-06-2011, 11:36 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 09-06-2011, 02:13 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 10-06-2011, 01:31 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de .Dudiii - 10-06-2011, 01:45 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 10-06-2011, 02:29 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 10-06-2011, 11:44 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 15-06-2011, 11:53 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 16-06-2011, 08:02 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 16-06-2011, 11:41 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de .Dudiii - 16-06-2011, 11:55 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 17-06-2011, 12:13 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 17-06-2011, 02:29 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 20-06-2011, 04:25 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 23-06-2011, 10:54 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 23-06-2011, 11:34 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 23-06-2011, 11:48 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 23-06-2011, 12:32 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 23-06-2011, 07:40 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 26-06-2011, 11:49 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 27-06-2011, 12:01 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 27-06-2011, 09:57 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de alexutzy97 - 29-06-2011, 11:35 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 30-06-2011, 09:11 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 30-06-2011, 09:57 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 30-06-2011, 03:18 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 30-06-2011, 03:42 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Wolves - 02-07-2011, 01:16 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 06-07-2011, 10:48 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 06-07-2011, 01:04 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 06-07-2011, 03:14 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de hiimera - 06-07-2011, 06:40 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kd.sens - 07-07-2011, 10:06 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 08-07-2011, 09:55 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Wolves - 09-07-2011, 09:31 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 11-07-2011, 04:08 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 11-07-2011, 05:05 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 11-07-2011, 07:33 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Inocente - 11-07-2011, 11:30 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 14-07-2011, 08:03 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 14-07-2011, 11:40 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Camelie. - 15-07-2011, 10:36 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Wolves - 20-07-2011, 06:36 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 25-07-2011, 09:31 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 25-07-2011, 10:07 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Camelie. - 25-07-2011, 10:09 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 25-07-2011, 10:19 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de hiimera - 28-07-2011, 04:20 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 08-08-2011, 02:14 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Camelie. - 08-08-2011, 02:49 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 10-08-2011, 10:01 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 11-09-2011, 04:27 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kimera - 11-09-2011, 04:56 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 12-09-2011, 08:13 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 13-09-2011, 07:34 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Camelie. - 13-09-2011, 09:47 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 09-10-2011, 12:17 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 09-10-2011, 12:31 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Addeh - 09-10-2011, 06:49 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 17-10-2011, 03:30 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 11:54 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Aiwendil - 25-10-2011, 11:49 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de hiimera - 25-10-2011, 11:33 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 27-10-2011, 08:51 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Piersicuta - 28-10-2011, 09:28 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 01-01-2012, 05:47 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kimera - 01-01-2012, 07:37 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de hiimera - 04-01-2012, 07:53 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 04-01-2012, 10:36 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 16-01-2012, 10:31 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Kimera - 17-01-2012, 04:20 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de hiimera - 19-01-2012, 12:50 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 10-03-2012, 12:47 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 10-03-2012, 02:43 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 10-03-2012, 03:23 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de hiimera - 10-03-2012, 03:23 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Lexxu - 10-03-2012, 09:01 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de MiraA - 10-03-2012, 11:55 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 17-03-2012, 01:22 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Lexxu - 17-03-2012, 10:19 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 07-05-2012, 10:08 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Ciquita - 16-05-2012, 04:34 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 04-06-2012, 01:44 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 16-06-2012, 12:42 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much. - de Rain - 02-07-2012, 12:37 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much [TERMINAT] - de MiraA - 02-07-2012, 09:53 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much [TERMINAT] - de hiimera - 02-07-2012, 11:30 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much [TERMINAT] - de Lexxu - 03-07-2012, 08:42 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much [TERMINAT] - de Rain - 03-07-2012, 03:15 PM

RE: This feeling hurts so much [TERMINAT] - de Erion. - 07-07-2012, 02:29 AM

RE: This feeling hurts so much [TERMINAT] - de Alii - 03-08-2013, 01:57 AM

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