>:d< Buna , am vazut ca nimeni nu ti-a lasat comment Ei bine sa incep eu : Ideea - e orginala , n-am mai vazut asa ceva . Actiunea - nu-i grabita , descrierea e buna , dialogul nu e mult nu e sec e perfect Greseli de ortografie n-am prea vazut . Imi place fic-ul tau e interesant , adica chiar ma intrebam cand mai vii cu o idee noua .Sunt curioasa daca Sasuke si Sakura aparea si ei pe aicea . Imi place caracterul lui Deida , dar sper ca nu e urata , adica ar fii bine ca sa vina macar maine la scoala imbrcata altfel sau nu stiu , eh oricum e ficul tau tu face ce vrei din el:) Imi place ca vei folosi si scene hentai si violente in fic, il face mai interesant :)
Deci Eu astept nextu
P.S: Super tare ideea . Bafta si spor la sctis !!!
Deci Eu astept nextu
P.S: Super tare ideea . Bafta si spor la sctis !!!
"If I died in your arms
Would you then give me your love
Would you tell me that you need me
and that I was the one
Now there's nothing I can say to you
To make you feel the same way too
When you walk away I just want to die
And I try not to break down and cry"
Would you then give me your love
Would you tell me that you need me
and that I was the one
Now there's nothing I can say to you
To make you feel the same way too
When you walk away I just want to die
And I try not to break down and cry"