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Predestined paths

marya

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#54

06-02-2010, 03:22 PM

Ca de obicei am intarziat....... :eto:

Un capitol nou foarte bun, actiunea a decurs bine, naratiunea a fost buna, dialogul nu a fost sec, greseli nu am vazut ...... descrierea a fost buna, dar se putea si mai bine..... :)

Unchiul Antonio.....cat imi place numele asta, imi aminteste de unchiul meu (au numele foarte asemanator :)) ).....Hmm, se pare ca Alex e geloasa, desi eu nu prea cred ca are de ce, eu cred ca Bibi este doar vreo prietena buna cu Edy, sau chiar vreo ruda, in nici un caz iubita, doar Ale ramane tot timpul pe primul loc ...nu???? :D

A fost un capitol foarte bun, dar oriunde e loc de mai bine.....Sper sa revii curand cu continuarea .....Bafta in continuare si multa imaginatie!!! Bye bye :*:*:*

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, chibi-ul lui marya02

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Predestined paths - de Minnie - 29-10-2009, 09:56 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Berry. - 29-10-2009, 10:33 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 29-10-2009, 11:21 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 01-11-2009, 02:50 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 02-11-2009, 12:01 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 17-11-2009, 08:50 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 23-11-2009, 09:17 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 28-11-2009, 04:21 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 30-11-2009, 03:43 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 04-12-2009, 03:19 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 09-12-2009, 10:24 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 16-12-2009, 07:35 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 16-12-2009, 11:27 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 18-12-2009, 02:20 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 18-12-2009, 02:33 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 18-12-2009, 12:59 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 18-12-2009, 07:40 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 22-12-2009, 11:31 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 23-12-2009, 12:00 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 24-12-2009, 02:51 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 24-12-2009, 11:39 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 26-12-2009, 02:16 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 26-12-2009, 03:54 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 27-12-2009, 12:50 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 29-12-2009, 06:53 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 30-12-2009, 06:01 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 30-12-2009, 11:26 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 02-01-2010, 02:27 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 02-01-2010, 08:14 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 03-01-2010, 03:04 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 05-01-2010, 05:40 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 06-01-2010, 11:50 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 09-01-2010, 11:18 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 11-01-2010, 03:19 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 15-01-2010, 09:36 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 16-01-2010, 02:41 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 21-01-2010, 05:39 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 22-01-2010, 06:12 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Khonsu - 22-01-2010, 08:46 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 24-01-2010, 03:21 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 24-01-2010, 04:26 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 25-01-2010, 07:25 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 25-01-2010, 08:46 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 27-01-2010, 01:37 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 27-01-2010, 02:13 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 28-01-2010, 06:41 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 28-01-2010, 06:41 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 30-01-2010, 02:43 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 30-01-2010, 04:37 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 30-01-2010, 04:50 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Lumiere.Kitty - 30-01-2010, 05:57 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 05-02-2010, 09:47 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 06-02-2010, 02:26 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 06-02-2010, 03:22 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 06-02-2010, 08:08 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 06-02-2010, 08:18 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 06-02-2010, 08:53 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 06-02-2010, 09:40 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 08-02-2010, 02:14 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 08-02-2010, 05:07 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 11-02-2010, 08:42 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 12-02-2010, 12:33 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 12-02-2010, 11:11 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 13-02-2010, 12:57 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Lumiere.Kitty - 13-02-2010, 01:58 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 13-02-2010, 04:33 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 14-02-2010, 08:21 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 18-02-2010, 04:00 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 19-02-2010, 04:35 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 20-02-2010, 11:20 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 21-02-2010, 08:11 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Mitus - 23-02-2010, 10:13 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 26-02-2010, 04:03 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 07-03-2010, 11:25 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 07-03-2010, 02:16 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 07-03-2010, 07:18 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 07-03-2010, 08:21 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 18-03-2010, 06:48 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 24-03-2010, 10:38 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 05-04-2010, 08:35 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 05-04-2010, 10:31 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Looolaaa13 - 09-04-2010, 11:13 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Mitus - 12-04-2010, 03:50 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 13-04-2010, 09:47 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Aly - 15-04-2010, 02:10 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Dreamer - 30-04-2010, 09:11 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 01-05-2010, 09:52 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 20-08-2010, 12:25 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Suicide Thoughts - 01-09-2010, 10:10 PM

RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 10-09-2010, 12:12 AM

RE: Predestined paths - de Zouly - 17-04-2011, 12:19 AM

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