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In alta lume.

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Well, am mai scris poezie in trecut si banuiesc faptul ca topicul a fost inchis. Oricum, m-am gandit sa mai incerc. Aceasta am scris-o pentru tema de 8 Martie la Engleza, in ultimul an de liceu. Accept orice fel de critica, nu sunt experta, doar imi place sa incerc. Enjoy xD.

Pure Obsession

The secrets of the Moon and Sun
Were not ours to bare,
And neither was the first look
Our eyes wanted to share.

But when I feel your heartbeat
From twenty miles away,
I feel like a vampire
Who's just ready to slay.

Conjoint, just like twin brothers
Our cores will turn to one,
And send us into Heaven
When everything is done.

When our trial is ready
And reason will appear,
The light of your perfection
Will go away, my dear.

The beam of the warm morning
Will make us realise
The look we shared just turned us
In creatures with red eyes.
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
In alta lume. - de DeDal N. - 21-04-2014, 05:11 PM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DeDal N. - 22-04-2014, 12:27 PM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DeDal N. - 24-04-2014, 01:45 PM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DreamGirl - 25-04-2014, 01:28 AM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DeDal N. - 25-04-2014, 10:58 AM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DreamGirl - 27-04-2014, 02:24 PM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DeDal N. - 27-04-2014, 02:58 PM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DreamGirl - 02-05-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DeDal N. - 03-05-2014, 06:23 PM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DeDal N. - 10-05-2014, 05:45 PM
RE: In alt? lume. - de DeDal N. - 06-06-2014, 06:50 PM
RE: In alta lume. - de DeDal N. - 25-06-2014, 01:52 PM
RE: In alta lume. - de DeDal N. - 02-07-2014, 04:31 PM
RE: In alta lume. - de DreamGirl - 07-09-2014, 08:25 AM


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