12-04-2013, 08:45 PM
Frumoasa poezie, apreciez si ca e in engleza. Unele parti chiar suna bine, insa incearca sa scrii "I" in loc de "i", fiindca altfel nu e incorect.
"On every damned life i fed" Fed? Nu inteleg la ce te referi. "In fiecare viata blestemat-o ce am hranit-o"?
Apropo, poti sa scrii si fara italic. Mi se pare ca asa se intelege mai usor, dar tu alegi.
Succes in continuare!
"On every damned life i fed" Fed? Nu inteleg la ce te referi. "In fiecare viata blestemat-o ce am hranit-o"?
Apropo, poti sa scrii si fara italic. Mi se pare ca asa se intelege mai usor, dar tu alegi.
Succes in continuare!
"Forgive you? Why? It's not like I'm mad or anything. You were the one who got angry; just like you said, I was being too nosy. I've always been like that, not knowing my boundaries. I'm the type who'll water a plant til it drowns."
- Yokozawa Takafumi no Baai, vol. 2