05-06-2012, 08:56 PM
Citat:"The most deadliest" . Trebuia sa rad.Oh wow, si stiam de greseala aia, uitasem complet de ea.
Citat:Personajele tale sunt cam anemiceIn general lucrurile sunt cam anemice pe la inceput, o data pentru ca primele cateva capitole nu le-am scris cu seriozitate, dar si pentru ca a fost prima data in viata cand chiar am scris ceva. De-a lungul celor 60 de capitole eu zic ca am avansat totusi ceva.
Cel putin asa sper. <3 Incepand cu al 4lea capitol am inceput sa fac mai serios. 
-Chapter 3 : Altar of Dehumanizing-
The altar was set in the most unpopulated area within the death god realm. But since the time when it was created i became only a ruin. It had probably never been used in its entire existence.
It was made of five identical pillars placed in such a way that they formed a pentagram. In the center of this pentagram there was drawn a symbol that resembled a snake holding a cross in his mouth.
The deaht god King instructed Mizuu to walk towards the center of the pentagram while he started activating the altar by touching every pillar one by one which seemed to aknowledge the presence of a King.
"Mizuu, what is the name of this human you want to revive? "
"I believe it is...Yagami Light, sir..."
"Yagami? That name sounds quite familiar..."
"Well, everyone has heard of him since Ryuk returned..."
"Yes, you must be right...Let's begin."
It was made of five identical pillars placed in such a way that they formed a pentagram. In the center of this pentagram there was drawn a symbol that resembled a snake holding a cross in his mouth.
The deaht god King instructed Mizuu to walk towards the center of the pentagram while he started activating the altar by touching every pillar one by one which seemed to aknowledge the presence of a King.
"Mizuu, what is the name of this human you want to revive? "
"I believe it is...Yagami Light, sir..."
"Yagami? That name sounds quite familiar..."
"Well, everyone has heard of him since Ryuk returned..."
"Yes, you must be right...Let's begin."