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#88

31-03-2013, 11:31 AM

In sfrasit un fic yaoi cu povestire la persoana a-III-a,felicitari...
Cat despre fic au fost destule momente in care chiar nu stiam cine e cine dar ideile is interesante magnifice si originale chiar......
Cateva greseli de ortografie care desigur se pot corecta si extrem,dupa mine,extrem de putina descriere...
In rest imi plac mult personajele si felul in care au evoluat dar si felul in care actiunea este prezentata, drama dar si suspansul se impletesc cu emotia si durerea personajelor ce cu succes este redata de catre tine noua...
Imi pare rau ca abia acum ti-am citit fictiul si ca nu am mai comentat la capitolele precedente...
Sper sa vii repede cu urmatorul capitol si din cate am vazut fictiul e impartit in carti deci abia astept sa-ti citesc intreg ficitiul deoarece mie imi plac foarte mult ficiturile lungi gen nuvele sau chiar romane si nu-mi plac deloc cele gen schita sau one shot...
Sper sa vii repede p-aici si sa nu uiti sa ma anunti...

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Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 10-09-2011, 10:12 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 10-09-2011, 10:28 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Zyklon - 11-09-2011, 03:19 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 11-09-2011, 09:28 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 19-09-2011, 06:33 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 22-09-2011, 11:18 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 23-09-2011, 09:14 AM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 01-10-2011, 06:14 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 06-10-2011, 10:38 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 07-10-2011, 06:15 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de alexutzy97 - 07-10-2011, 09:30 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 08-10-2011, 12:10 AM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 08-10-2011, 08:35 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 13-10-2011, 08:23 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 13-10-2011, 09:26 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Deeh - 13-10-2011, 10:07 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 14-10-2011, 11:22 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Rain - 19-10-2011, 11:17 AM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 19-10-2011, 11:13 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 31-10-2011, 04:41 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Deeh - 31-10-2011, 08:12 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 04-11-2011, 08:38 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 05-11-2011, 01:00 PM

RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 25-11-2011, 08:41 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de MiraA - 08-12-2011, 08:09 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 09-12-2011, 03:18 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Rain - 12-12-2011, 12:22 AM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 16-12-2011, 11:58 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de dot dot curve :) - 17-12-2011, 03:03 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 20-12-2011, 10:50 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 26-12-2011, 04:49 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de dot dot curve :) - 26-12-2011, 06:19 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Rain - 28-12-2011, 05:58 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 06-01-2012, 10:28 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Rain - 06-01-2012, 10:35 PM

RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Blue. - 08-01-2012, 06:02 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Pà¸„nÄ‘à¸„. - 09-01-2012, 06:17 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de MiraA - 17-01-2012, 02:00 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 31-01-2012, 10:56 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 31-01-2012, 11:38 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de AbiiShu' - 01-02-2012, 03:34 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Rain - 01-02-2012, 10:12 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Pà¸„nÄ‘à¸„. - 02-02-2012, 07:38 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de MiraA - 04-02-2012, 12:43 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 11-03-2012, 04:23 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 11-03-2012, 12:20 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Rain - 04-04-2012, 05:35 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 08-04-2012, 12:44 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 08-04-2012, 10:46 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Rain - 11-04-2012, 06:33 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 04-05-2012, 10:35 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Alixa - 06-05-2012, 03:07 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-05-2012, 11:55 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Alixa - 13-05-2012, 02:48 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Ciquita - 27-05-2012, 02:42 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 03-06-2012, 02:17 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Ciquita - 03-06-2012, 07:48 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 03-06-2012, 01:16 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Alixa - 03-06-2012, 02:46 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 03-06-2012, 06:29 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Rain - 03-06-2012, 09:16 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 17-06-2012, 02:37 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 17-06-2012, 09:43 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de AbiiShu' - 18-06-2012, 08:29 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 18-06-2012, 09:56 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de y2k - 19-06-2012, 05:27 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 03-07-2012, 12:46 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de CiokolataxPortocala - 03-07-2012, 01:57 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 03-07-2012, 08:17 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 03-07-2012, 11:42 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 15-07-2012, 02:31 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 15-07-2012, 02:52 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 15-07-2012, 10:09 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 01-08-2012, 01:34 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 01-08-2012, 10:00 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 01-08-2012, 10:56 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Justine - 27-08-2012, 08:44 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 14-09-2012, 12:10 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 14-09-2012, 01:32 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Justine - 15-09-2012, 02:01 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 11-10-2012, 10:36 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 12-10-2012, 05:18 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de RosetteFoxy - 12-10-2012, 08:33 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-02-2013, 06:19 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de FuNnY bUnNy - 10-03-2013, 06:03 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de ohaio_angel - 15-03-2013, 09:25 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Dream_great - 31-03-2013, 11:31 AM

RE: Alpha Boy - de Kira's Scarlet - 30-04-2013, 04:46 PM

RE: Alpha Boy - de ImAfraidofWafers - 12-05-2013, 09:23 PM

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