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Mirror of love

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Hey...ai pus deja continuarea :x...bun :x....se cam ofileste dragostea :))....ai greseli multe...fii mai atenta cand verifici capitolul,citeste-l de 2,3 ori ca nu se intampla nimic...greseli(in afara de cele 3 specificate mai sus):
privindul=privindu-l
zambiind=zambind
relizez=realizez
intrr-un=intr-un
patjocoritor=batjocoritor
chea=cheia
intra-devar=intr-adevar
piede=pierde
simm=simt
aces=acest
hipnozita=hipnotiza
flacara aceea sa piara din ochii lui...cum adica :d....era mai bine....parea sa piara din ochii lui....

Bun....am zis greselile....unele de tastare..altele.....dupa cum ti-am spus...reciteste capitolul dupa ce il scrii...atent...incearca sa corectezi greselile astea...pentru ca se poate :p

astept nextu'....chuu:* sh gambate :*





B'bye :-h



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 04:29 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 04:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 18-04-2009, 06:21 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mischa - 18-04-2009, 07:59 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 18-04-2009, 08:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 09:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 09:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 10:44 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 19-04-2009, 10:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 11:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 19-04-2009, 08:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 09:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 10:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 10:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 11:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 20-04-2009, 09:30 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 11:46 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 12:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 12:23 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 02:25 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 20-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 07:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 20-04-2009, 08:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 09:13 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 10:54 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 04:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 21-04-2009, 04:50 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 21-04-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 05:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 21-04-2009, 05:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 06:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 07:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 07:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 21-04-2009, 08:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 08:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 10:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 11:14 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 08:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 22-04-2009, 08:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 03:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 22-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 22-04-2009, 05:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 05:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 22-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 22-04-2009, 06:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 07:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 24-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 24-04-2009, 07:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 24-04-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 25-04-2009, 03:43 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 26-04-2009, 04:22 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 26-04-2009, 04:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 27-04-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 27-04-2009, 07:38 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 28-04-2009, 06:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 28-04-2009, 06:26 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 29-04-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 29-04-2009, 08:33 PM


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