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You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi]

Mitsukai Yoru Deconectat
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#7
17-08-2008, 03:33 AM
Draga mea Lady Anime...ce pot sa-ti zic in afara ca imi place foarte mult fic-ul tau. Ador ideea...:victorie:....Am obesrvat o imbunatatire de la primul capitol la ultimul...so tine-o tot asa.
Nu mi-au placut prescurtarile alea care dau un aspect nu foarte frumos fic-ului. Ai grija si la repetii.
De exemplu aici nu suna ffff bn...

Citat:Acesta incerca sa isi acopere partile intime care erau acum dezgolite si puteau fi vazute de oricine ar fi incercat sa le priveasca.Acesta isi acopera acele parti intime cu un prosop

repeti aceleasi cuvinte si aceeasi idee..

In rest Bv pt acest fic minunat pe care am sa-l citesc pana la capat...

Repede continuarea...

Pwp y see`ya!!!
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 31-07-2008, 12:57 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 31-07-2008, 11:34 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-08-2008, 06:57 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 09-08-2008, 01:17 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Mitsukai Yoru - 17-08-2008, 03:33 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 22-08-2008, 11:07 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 24-08-2008, 10:57 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 27-08-2008, 02:37 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 17-01-2009, 01:30 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 17-01-2009, 10:41 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 24-01-2009, 02:24 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 24-01-2009, 06:59 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-02-2009, 11:12 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 01-02-2009, 03:39 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-02-2009, 05:11 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 01-02-2009, 06:45 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 03-02-2009, 09:10 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 03-02-2009, 09:51 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 04-02-2009, 07:33 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 05-02-2009, 01:56 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-02-2009, 11:36 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 07-02-2009, 07:15 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 14-02-2009, 12:47 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-02-2009, 12:17 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 15-02-2009, 02:18 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-02-2009, 04:40 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 21-02-2009, 12:31 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 22-02-2009, 02:06 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 28-02-2009, 02:07 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 28-02-2009, 09:42 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-03-2009, 02:25 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 08-03-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 08-03-2009, 10:02 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 14-03-2009, 06:40 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 15-03-2009, 08:13 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-03-2009, 09:06 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 20-03-2009, 09:28 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 28-03-2009, 04:38 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 02-04-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 03-04-2009, 11:42 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 03-04-2009, 11:59 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de love_anime - 04-04-2009, 02:15 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 04-04-2009, 06:31 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 05-04-2009, 12:49 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 05-04-2009, 01:20 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 10-04-2009, 11:13 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 11-04-2009, 12:30 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 11-04-2009, 02:56 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-05-2009, 03:31 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 02-05-2009, 05:21 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 08-06-2009, 12:00 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 08-06-2009, 06:31 PM

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