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Cand viata se complica

Ok, imi fac si eu aparitia pe aici. Cam tarziu ce-i drept, dar ce sa-i faci? :]]
Hai sa revenim totusi la poveste. Deci, mie sincer acest capitol mi s-a parut mult mai bun decat ultimile cateva pe care le-ai postat. Actiunea nu mi s-a mai parut grabita, iar descrierea a fost mai buna. Ai descris bine si tot ceea ce simtea Lizzie si reactiile ei si ale celor din jur. Greseli de tastare parca am vazut una singura, oricum nimic dramatic.
Ok, faptul ca acea Caroline a incercat pana acum sa o omoare pe Lizzie de doua ori mi se pare curios. Ok, prima oara sa zicem ca a fost din caza faptului ca nu o putea inghiti si oricum o furculita nu prea poate rani asa grav pe cineva. Dar cand deja ajunge sa incerce sa o impuste totul devine brusc mai serios. Asta ma duce cu gandul ori la faptul ca o uraste foarte mult pe Lizzie, ori ca e ceva mai mult de atat la mijloc. In ambele cazuri sper ca ne vei da ceva mai multe detalii in curand, deoarece pe mine una acest lucru m-a facut sa fiu foarte curioasa.
Asa, nu pot sa trec cu vederea discutia pe care avut-o Alex cu Lizzie. Alex i-a spus cateva lucruri foarte adevarate lui Lizzie, de care sincer la un moment dat imi parea rau, adica sufera si ea destul de mult presupun, dar apoi m-am razgandit putin (mai mult) deoarece fata asta mi se pare foarte egoista de ceva timp incoace si desi sunt convinsa ca are intentii bune, modul in care actioneaza s-ar putea sa nu fie cel mai bun, asa cum crede ea. Iar eu oricum sunt convinsa ca Alex va suferi dupa ea chiar daca Lizzie i-a spus ca il uraste. Cat despre gestul lui Lizzie de a-i spune acest lucru, ei bine, nu sunt convinsa ca Alex a crezut-o 100% si mai cred de asemenea ca ceea ce a facut el dupa aceea a fost din cauza faptului ca era foarte suparat, furios si atat.
De asemenea, Lizzie mi se pare ca greseste destul de mult in ultimul in timp si ca in cele din urma chiar va ramane singura, asa cum a spus la finalul capitolului.
In momentul de fata pot spune ca povestea ma face sa fiu din nou corioasa in legatura cu ceea ce va urma, deoarece s-au intamplat cateva lucruri in acest capitol la care sincer nu ma asteptam.
In concluzie, mi-a placut ^^ Spor la scris in continuare.
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Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 06-08-2011, 09:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 10-08-2011, 11:38 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Fiction - 11-08-2011, 01:52 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 11-08-2011, 11:58 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 11-08-2011, 12:32 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 12-08-2011, 10:49 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 12-08-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 13-08-2011, 12:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 13-08-2011, 07:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 13-08-2011, 09:24 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 14-08-2011, 08:01 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 14-08-2011, 09:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 16-08-2011, 12:13 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 16-08-2011, 07:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 17-08-2011, 02:38 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 17-08-2011, 03:06 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 17-08-2011, 04:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 18-08-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 18-08-2011, 01:00 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 18-08-2011, 08:06 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 18-08-2011, 09:20 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 19-08-2011, 01:48 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 19-08-2011, 02:22 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 20-08-2011, 08:37 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 20-08-2011, 09:50 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 22-08-2011, 12:49 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 22-08-2011, 01:48 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 23-08-2011, 03:03 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 23-08-2011, 03:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 24-08-2011, 12:34 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 24-08-2011, 01:26 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 25-08-2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 25-08-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 26-08-2011, 04:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 26-08-2011, 05:10 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 27-08-2011, 04:21 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 27-08-2011, 10:11 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 27-08-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 28-08-2011, 10:01 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 28-08-2011, 01:08 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 28-08-2011, 01:44 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 28-08-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 29-08-2011, 11:44 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 29-08-2011, 12:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 29-08-2011, 03:17 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 29-08-2011, 03:20 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 30-08-2011, 11:12 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 30-08-2011, 11:53 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 30-08-2011, 12:17 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 31-08-2011, 10:22 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 31-08-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 31-08-2011, 11:20 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 01-09-2011, 10:13 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 01-09-2011, 10:32 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 01-09-2011, 12:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 02-09-2011, 10:12 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 02-09-2011, 11:33 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 02-09-2011, 11:37 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 02-09-2011, 11:53 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 03-09-2011, 07:20 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 03-09-2011, 08:14 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 04-09-2011, 07:06 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 04-09-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 05-09-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 05-09-2011, 10:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 06-09-2011, 06:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 06-09-2011, 07:13 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 07-09-2011, 12:55 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 07-09-2011, 09:04 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 07-09-2011, 11:54 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 08-09-2011, 07:19 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 08-09-2011, 11:06 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 08-09-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 08-09-2011, 09:08 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 09-09-2011, 05:34 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 10-09-2011, 10:47 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 10-09-2011, 01:36 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 10-09-2011, 11:44 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 16-09-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 17-09-2011, 10:37 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 17-09-2011, 01:53 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 25-09-2011, 11:07 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 25-09-2011, 11:47 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 25-09-2011, 02:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 02-10-2011, 05:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 02-10-2011, 07:33 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 04-10-2011, 09:34 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 04-10-2011, 09:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 05-10-2011, 04:08 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 10-10-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 11-10-2011, 01:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 11-10-2011, 02:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 13-10-2011, 08:47 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 13-10-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de hiimera - 15-10-2011, 01:48 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 21-10-2011, 10:20 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 21-10-2011, 05:27 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 08:54 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 27-10-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 28-10-2011, 02:50 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Blanket - 28-10-2011, 06:46 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 31-10-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 01-11-2011, 11:27 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 06-11-2011, 09:01 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Googga - 06-11-2011, 09:46 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 20-11-2011, 09:39 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 21-11-2011, 09:24 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Googga - 25-11-2011, 12:57 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 08-12-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 08-12-2011, 11:02 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 11-12-2011, 07:41 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 11-12-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 25-12-2011, 08:18 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 26-12-2011, 04:43 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Blanket - 27-12-2011, 04:04 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 31-12-2011, 01:12 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 07-01-2012, 07:58 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 07-01-2012, 08:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 12-01-2012, 08:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 13-01-2012, 08:59 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 29-01-2012, 10:01 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 31-01-2012, 12:45 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de ~Dana~ - 02-02-2012, 12:30 AM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 04-02-2012, 09:44 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 05-02-2012, 12:56 AM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 09-02-2012, 09:18 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 09-02-2012, 09:56 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 10-02-2012, 01:13 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 25-02-2012, 09:59 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 26-02-2012, 09:42 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 26-02-2012, 10:09 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 13-03-2012, 10:17 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 14-03-2012, 06:05 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 15-03-2012, 08:40 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 12-04-2012, 06:01 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de matzaplouata - 15-05-2012, 06:52 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 08-06-2012, 08:22 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 09-06-2012, 02:35 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Chris`sCookie - 09-06-2012, 03:03 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 19-06-2012, 08:34 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 20-06-2012, 09:15 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 21-06-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 29-06-2012, 06:35 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 30-06-2012, 12:39 AM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 01-07-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 12-07-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 14-07-2012, 12:58 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 20-07-2012, 06:55 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 20-07-2012, 09:02 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 14-09-2012, 08:57 PM


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