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Am I not good enough?

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Well, that`s weird. The last part of the chapter, that`s what I was talkin` about. I can already smell the Fantasy inside it, and it`s sooo tasty.
Now, let`s get back to our business. Yeah, I`m kinda english zombie tonight, I already told my sister a whole theory in english, accidentaly, so I suppose a could leave a comment according to your masterpiece now. So...yep, speechless again. Even though the first idea, (which I`m not supposed to talk about) was also a great idea, now that I can also see the great possibilities that this new version offers you, I tend to bealive that this second chance that you offered yourself is a real bless for you, because you can open your mind wider, and also for us, giving us the oportunity to see again the beauty of your wonderful imagination. Ook, I`m sorry for this endless and meaningless comment, but... as I already told u, i`m speechless, and it`s just your fault.

And now, how could I forget them? The ones, the unbelieble, unexpactable, an incredible...grammar/typing errors :-|
rules are make - Well, Im not as good at this as my teacher, but...I think it`s "rules are made to be broken"
didn`t di anything. - Nope, no idea. Did, or do? `Cause I`m pretty sure it`s not di
she was working on making just a second ago. - I don`t know...maybe without that "making"?
caching - uhm...catching, I guess
and go in the bathroom where I throw Aries in the big bed with black sheets without any considerations - He has a bed in the bathroom? That kid`s weird...


Oook, I think that`s it for now. Sorry for being late again, it`s really stupid for me, but I just can`t stop, So...se ya at your next chapter >:D<
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Am I not good enough? - de BloodyInnocence - 09-07-2010, 10:47 PM
RE: Am I not good enough? - de dark.blue - 23-07-2010, 09:21 PM
RE: Am I not good enough? - de She - 24-07-2010, 12:25 PM
RE: Am I not good enough? [english +18] - de Dark Blue - 21-08-2011, 03:03 AM
RE: Am I not good enough? [english +18] - de DiZ - 26-12-2011, 12:33 AM

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