02-08-2011, 11:14 AM
Buna :) un capitol dragut
desrierea e buna si dialogul la fel :) actiunea nu e grabita si naratiunea e ok
ma bucur ca iesit si ea la "lumina" si ca nu mai sta in spital (eu as inebuni sa nu ies deloc afara :)) )
astept cu nerabdare urmatorul capitol si sper ca Lizzy sa si revina si sa nu se termine asa...trist :) chiar daca povestea in sine e trista :D
Bye :*
desrierea e buna si dialogul la fel :) actiunea nu e grabita si naratiunea e ok
ma bucur ca iesit si ea la "lumina" si ca nu mai sta in spital (eu as inebuni sa nu ies deloc afara :)) )
astept cu nerabdare urmatorul capitol si sper ca Lizzy sa si revina si sa nu se termine asa...trist :) chiar daca povestea in sine e trista :D
Bye :*
To the right, To the left, we will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
![[Imagine: beautyfullgrl.png]](http://i551.photobucket.com/albums/ii467/cepulamea/Semnaturi/beautyfullgrl.png)
I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1
To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1