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Sadism..

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25-06-2011, 10:20 AM

Buna:yes:
Acest capitol este mai bun ca celalalt, ai mai pus nitel descriere, actiunea mie nu mi se pare grabita, dialogul nu e sec, greseli de tastatura am vazut dar foarte putine. In loc de "***" puteai pune Flashback si Endflashback. Si nu mai pune "k" si "c" aici ma refer la adika- adica. Deci fara alte lucruri astept nerabdatoare continuarea. :bye:

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Sadism.. - de Alicia - 23-06-2011, 12:46 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 23-06-2011, 01:20 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 23-06-2011, 01:44 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de hiimera - 23-06-2011, 02:17 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 23-06-2011, 10:51 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 24-06-2011, 01:33 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 25-06-2011, 10:20 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 25-06-2011, 11:11 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 25-06-2011, 01:08 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 25-06-2011, 07:26 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 26-06-2011, 11:38 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Paty.Paty - 28-06-2011, 11:49 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Ayuu. - 28-06-2011, 01:59 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 28-06-2011, 03:19 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 29-06-2011, 01:34 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 30-06-2011, 01:18 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Stella - 30-06-2011, 10:30 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 30-06-2011, 01:38 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 30-06-2011, 08:13 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Paty.Paty - 30-06-2011, 08:26 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 01-07-2011, 02:58 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 01-07-2011, 01:12 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Paty.Paty - 02-07-2011, 07:11 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 03-07-2011, 09:08 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Miranda. - 04-07-2011, 10:56 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 05-07-2011, 01:19 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 05-07-2011, 01:42 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Paty.Paty - 05-07-2011, 02:29 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 05-07-2011, 04:27 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 07-07-2011, 10:25 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 12-07-2011, 02:21 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 12-07-2011, 08:36 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 13-07-2011, 12:57 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Piersicuta - 13-07-2011, 05:08 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 04-08-2011, 10:45 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 05-08-2011, 12:05 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Piersicuta - 06-08-2011, 10:13 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 09-08-2011, 03:39 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 09-08-2011, 08:49 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Ayumi Michaelis - 14-08-2011, 11:39 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Catsz - 17-08-2011, 01:20 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Miranda. - 17-08-2011, 07:47 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Alicia - 18-08-2011, 01:32 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Catsz - 18-08-2011, 10:47 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Miranda. - 18-08-2011, 11:56 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Ayumi Michaelis - 19-08-2011, 11:26 PM

RE: Sadism.. - de Sho-Yo - 20-08-2011, 08:51 AM

RE: Sadism.. - de Search - 01-10-2011, 10:51 AM

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