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This N' That

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Too beautiful to die, too wild
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#62
13-06-2011, 11:52 AM
Inca nu a comentat nimeni? Ce urat [-( cred ca eu voi fi prima care va face asta :)
Acest capitol ma pus putin pe ganduri. Pentru inceput nu stiam ca Alexa avea parinti, am inceput cu idea ca parintii ei au murit sau ceva de genu. Este foarte bune ca are o mama desi este urat ca saraca este in spital.
Alex va trebui s o ierte, nu are nici un motiv sa fie suparat ca Alexa isi viziteaza mama. Bn poate fi suparat ca nu i a zis de ea dar nimic altceva.

Acum sa revenim la gramatica. Greseli de tastare nu prea am vazut, descrierea e buna si naratiunea la fel iar dialogul este potrivit.
Poi, c am atat am avut de spus :) astept cu nerabdare urmatorul capitol si mult noroc la scris :)
Ja ne! :*
To the right, To the left, we will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world



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I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1

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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
This N' That - de Alexi - 05-03-2011, 04:05 PM
RE: This N' That - de tamoshiku - 05-03-2011, 05:08 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 10-03-2011, 10:06 AM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 12-03-2011, 01:47 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 12-03-2011, 02:47 PM
RE: This N' That - de Sasha. - 13-03-2011, 12:06 AM
RE: This N' That - de Amélie - 13-03-2011, 04:45 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 19-03-2011, 08:22 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 22-03-2011, 06:11 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 26-03-2011, 07:55 PM
RE: This N' That - de MooN. - 26-03-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: This N' That - de βεκi - 27-03-2011, 11:29 AM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 01-04-2011, 02:43 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 01-04-2011, 07:30 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 10-04-2011, 02:11 PM
RE: This N' That - de MooN. - 10-04-2011, 04:05 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 11-04-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 12-04-2011, 08:41 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 12-04-2011, 09:59 PM
RE: This N' That - de Ymequa - 12-04-2011, 10:14 PM
RE: This N' That - de MooN. - 13-04-2011, 08:48 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 16-04-2011, 04:16 PM
RE: This N' That - de BuBuLiNa - 17-04-2011, 10:38 PM
RE: This N' That - de Stormrage - 19-04-2011, 12:42 PM
RE: This N' That - de Nya. - 20-04-2011, 11:25 AM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 23-04-2011, 02:18 PM
RE: This N' That - de Ely1496 - 23-04-2011, 04:19 PM
RE: This N' That - de Adelinne` - 23-04-2011, 05:38 PM
RE: This N' That - de βεκi - 24-04-2011, 02:01 AM
RE: This N' That - de Stormrage - 24-04-2011, 12:28 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 26-04-2011, 04:50 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 27-04-2011, 06:39 PM
RE: This N' That - de Stormrage - 27-04-2011, 08:56 PM
RE: This N' That - de KiDda - 28-04-2011, 09:44 PM
RE: This N' That - de Maria - 30-04-2011, 10:33 AM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 02-05-2011, 07:01 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 02-05-2011, 07:28 PM
RE: This N' That - de Stormrage - 02-05-2011, 08:55 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 06-05-2011, 07:30 PM
RE: This N' That - de Stormrage - 06-05-2011, 07:45 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 09-05-2011, 06:41 PM
RE: This N' That - de Stormrage - 09-05-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 09-05-2011, 11:35 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 13-05-2011, 06:34 PM
RE: This N' That - de Reine - 13-05-2011, 06:56 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 15-05-2011, 05:09 PM
RE: This N' That - de βεκi - 16-05-2011, 09:55 AM
RE: This N' That - de sarawulf - 17-05-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 19-05-2011, 11:55 AM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 20-05-2011, 06:26 PM
RE: This N' That - de Ymequa - 20-05-2011, 07:35 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 21-05-2011, 01:26 AM
RE: This N' That - de Reine - 21-05-2011, 03:02 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 24-05-2011, 07:13 PM
RE: This N' That - de Ymequa - 24-05-2011, 09:16 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 28-05-2011, 06:09 PM
RE: This N' That - de Reine - 28-05-2011, 09:55 PM
RE: This N' That - de Maria - 29-05-2011, 08:27 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 03-06-2011, 03:01 PM
RE: This N' That - de Katniss - 03-06-2011, 07:54 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 08-06-2011, 04:45 PM
RE: This N' That - de KiDda - 13-06-2011, 11:52 AM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 14-06-2011, 01:38 PM
RE: This N' That - de Assyria - 14-06-2011, 02:02 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 20-06-2011, 12:34 PM
RE: This N' That - de KiDda - 21-06-2011, 10:16 PM
RE: This N' That - de Alexi - 25-06-2011, 05:51 PM


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