06-06-2011, 09:52 PM
DUROOO !!! :))
deci cum ti am zis am trecut si eu pe aici'sa :)) sa vad ce mai e nou si imi place ce am citit desi, sunt c am nedumerita, crede am ca Sakura si Sasuke au facut o deja
nu stiam ca e prima oara :)) mrg sa revenitm la critici; descrierea e bunaa si e din belsug, dialog nu a fost decat o propozitie care puteai s o transformi in vorbire indirecta dar, este bine si asa, nu e gresit :)
poi c am atat, mi a placut acest capitol si il astept nu nerabdare pe urmatorul :)
Bye! :*
deci cum ti am zis am trecut si eu pe aici'sa :)) sa vad ce mai e nou si imi place ce am citit desi, sunt c am nedumerita, crede am ca Sakura si Sasuke au facut o deja
nu stiam ca e prima oara :)) mrg sa revenitm la critici; descrierea e bunaa si e din belsug, dialog nu a fost decat o propozitie care puteai s o transformi in vorbire indirecta dar, este bine si asa, nu e gresit :)
poi c am atat, mi a placut acest capitol si il astept nu nerabdare pe urmatorul :)
Bye! :*
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To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1