Oneshots

[Lia]

I've just finished re-reading the piece you've written, and I must say, you have improved greatly since I've last read anything written by you three or four years ago. I really fancy this oneshot, because it's greatly original and it has its small fireworks that keep you reading on and on. Even though it's just a short story the plot is very well thought and it has accomplished its role, leaving no unanswered questions along the way.

I am sorry for the rather short critique, but I humbly say to you that I like it.

I expect more from you, Master. The force is strong with you *bows*