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Because we are rebels!

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#30
19-11-2010, 05:54 PM
Heeyy! So, vad ca ai bagat nextul nyaa!
Well ai cam turuit naratiunea de ma faci sa ametesc. In al doilea rand ai avut si cateva greseli de exprimare si de taste "mă luat în braţe", "cu minte din club" si mai erau cateva insa nu mai stau sa le caut, de-a bi le-am gasit si pe astea (bine, doar pe astea le-am tinut minte nici nu cred ca mai erau altele>.>). In rest a fost curat, ai descris cu lux de amanunte mai ales la partea "fierbine" :perv:.
So waiting for new chapter :-bd.
Just the
way you know me..


Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 06-10-2010, 03:52 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Ada - 06-10-2010, 04:56 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de InocentAngel - 06-10-2010, 08:08 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Shadow. - 06-10-2010, 09:14 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 06-10-2010, 09:40 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Debb.' - 06-10-2010, 09:44 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 06-10-2010, 10:08 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Axel . - 07-10-2010, 06:12 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 08-10-2010, 02:48 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 08-10-2010, 06:52 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 11-10-2010, 03:05 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Shadow. - 28-10-2010, 06:36 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 06-11-2010, 10:05 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 11-11-2010, 04:40 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Flash - 12-11-2010, 10:51 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 18-11-2010, 10:13 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 18-11-2010, 10:18 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 19-11-2010, 04:54 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 19-11-2010, 05:54 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 19-11-2010, 11:29 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 20-11-2010, 06:17 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 20-11-2010, 11:56 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 21-11-2010, 09:52 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 21-11-2010, 12:46 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 22-11-2010, 12:04 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 23-11-2010, 04:13 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 23-11-2010, 07:22 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Dufresne - 23-11-2010, 07:44 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 23-11-2010, 08:35 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 23-11-2010, 08:37 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 23-11-2010, 09:02 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 24-11-2010, 11:20 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Lilishor - 26-11-2010, 08:13 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 26-11-2010, 08:26 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 14-12-2010, 11:44 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 14-12-2010, 04:29 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 14-12-2010, 08:36 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 16-12-2010, 12:14 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Dufresne - 16-12-2010, 03:52 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 17-12-2010, 04:37 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 21-12-2010, 10:09 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 28-12-2010, 12:15 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de crisy_bby - 28-12-2010, 01:00 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Mariah . - 28-12-2010, 01:45 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 02-01-2011, 01:55 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 17-01-2011, 07:14 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Mariah . - 17-01-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 17-01-2011, 11:27 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 19-01-2011, 01:19 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 19-01-2011, 05:31 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 19-01-2011, 10:08 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 20-01-2011, 12:46 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 23-01-2011, 12:43 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 14-02-2011, 12:25 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Rose ^^ - 14-04-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KiDda - 18-04-2011, 11:20 PM


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